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love & poison

Sabit Kamal S., Dhaka, Bangladesh By romanticpoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time., Dhaka, Bangladesh

When you are disappearing in love
People can't see you, you can see love around you
You feel strange, but want to feel more
After some moments you get exhausted,
Maybe because your lover didn’t disappear with You
you haul & shriek but yet there are no symptoms of her presence
You act like crazy ‘’where are you” you repeat
Still no feedback of sound in this scene
Just the sound of your scream , you try to escape from this scene
The time when you're leaving ,
You prayed to stay one more time in this scene,

With your lady lover

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7 comment(s)
There is a lot of passion in this one. You create the image in the reader's mind of this emotion, and I felt it. Images are going to be your best friend in poetry- creating a visual that protrays an emotion will stick with the reader and impact them. You've started doing that with this, so harness it and use it to your advantage. :)
Apr. 19, 2013 at 1:49 AM • Report
This is similiar to Romeo and Juliet :) I love it for tht because i lovee R&J <3 Niceee keep it up ^.^
Apr. 07, 2013 at 10:06 PM • Report
u know one of my friends told me the same thing, the interesting part is that i haven't read "romeo & juliet' & also didn't see the movie
Apr. 08, 2013 at 1:45 AM • Report
haha ironic. A future Shakespeare you'll become then, eh? :P aha :)
Apr. 08, 2013 at 3:16 PM • Report
awesome! loved the word flow and concept. Keep writing!
Apr. 07, 2013 at 11:08 AM • Report
thanx for ur true response
Apr. 07, 2013 at 11:11 AM • Report
this is amazing
Apr. 06, 2013 at 11:31 AM • Report