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My Dad , My World

shoana s., brampton, Canada By -namaste-, brampton, Canada

Everyday,Everynight it's who I think about,
You make me smile all the time and make me laugh aloud.
You are my heart and my soul,
You are my Santa who lives in the north pole.

You put on a smile,
As big as the river Nile.
Even if mom says 'no',
You never make me feel low

On the moon , you would take me in my dream,
And the moon would be made of vanilla and cream.
You are my idol and my inspiration,
I Thank god for making this wonderful creation.

It's your day ,
It's my love of bay,
Only for you,
Dad I love you!

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5 comment(s)
this is lovely! and you must be very proud of your dad, he sounds like a brilliant father:)
Jul. 25, 2013 at 3:00 PM • Report
Thnx... N yes I am n his is toooo....
Jul. 25, 2013 at 5:56 PM • Report
This is nice and beutiful, i like it even more becuase its personal its about your dad
Aug. 02, 2013 at 10:18 AM • Report
Ahh what great sentiment. The diction you used was great for the tone of the poem. Light and fluffy like that vanilla ice cream you talked about :P Great job! And thank your dad for me! I'm sure he's a wonderful man.
Jul. 24, 2013 at 10:52 PM • Report
Wow.... Thank u !!! Ur comment made my day!
Jul. 24, 2013 at 11:10 PM • Report