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Rainfall This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Samantha M., Springfield, MO By SammieRM, Urbana, MO

Rain pitter-patters
against paint-chipped windows, like
toddlers' feet on tile.

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3 comment(s)
how did this come to your mind it is so beauitful
Mar. 14, 2014 at 1:49 PM • Report
I love the rain and my baby brother does too. Whenever he sees it raining, he runs around the kitchen with so much happiness, it makes me happy too. 
Jun. 06, 2014 at 11:23 AM • Report
The simplicity of this poem reminds me of Sandburg's "Fog" and "Splinter". Just delictate and precise with its imagery. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. 
Oct. 16, 2013 at 2:36 PM • Report