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Pretty Girrl?

By Andrewsaur, La Porte, TX

Whats new with you pretty girrl?
I saw you walking through my mind
I couldn't help but stare
Staring at thoughts
thoughts I like to think you think as well
Cause you're like the sun under the ocean
beautifuly diluted
afraid to get to close
for fear of death
but I wonder if its worth it
most likely
what's life without risk
without happiness
without death
without this
wishing waiting
exiled from the exiles
proffering not to know me
but knowing you know me.

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1 comment(s)
This is my favorite poem I've read on Teenink and probably anywhere else for that matter! It really speaks to me, and I love how unexpecting it is. I'm sure anyone who sees the title "pretty girl" is going to expect a sappy romance.  Never stop writing. If you do, no girl will ever think the same thoughts you do. --indiewriter<3
Jan. 19, 2013 at 5:56 PM • Report