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Insanity

April 20, 2015
By ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)


Insanity is doing the same thing and expecting different results, right? So what should I call it if I do this one more time and get the different answers? Someone forgot to factor in the unpredictability rate of females.

But I didn't.

I recognize how you do, what you do, so please don't underestimate the things done to or by any of us.

We are the angels of heaven, the gods of rome, the royals of England. Shall I go on? It seems needless if you get the points I'm making.

SO to start off, how are you today? Sure, I see you everyday, but that's the point. I wanna give you your deserved space, so when I stay at my table as you walk passed, don't think I'm ignoring you, I'm just trying to give you the space you are due, for I want to preserve this romance like strawberries in the winter.We

are what you seek, but I believe you seek more. WHat is it? Please, be straight with me, my heart cannot bare another user nor another usery. Do you see what I see when we lock eyes in class? Do you understand the concept of MY love? For my love, regardless of long or short, is different in comparison.

I know I've spit this before, I know you're tired of the same words to describe a different game. This isn't me anymore, it's us. This isn't courtship anymore, it's love. Actual love, I've never felt it before, never had it's taste on my tongue nor it's thought in my head.

But you've put it there. The chance for a real relationship!!! Am I really ready? Are you? then get ready, get set, let's go!!!!!!! The race is on, now I realize what the true effect you have on me is.

Now I can tell you how much I love you and how much I care for you, even if it's just a telepathic wish, you will feel the presence of it in  your forethought.

You make me want to overdose on love music, chillin on the bed in complete darkness, just marinating on the words and anylising there meanings, yes you, my heart and soul, sold to me by an unlikely vender, your soul.

So we traded, bartered actually. your heart for mine, a likely trade. But what are the expected drawbacks? No, I'm no skeptic, but I am real, so what are the real intentions of so magnificent a spirit?

I will be yours, for you are mine, but don't hurt me, please. I stay on my knees in prayer of an unbroken heart, yet so often it is. Alas, you are the one, so will my heart be safe? So often I asked that, so often it was answered with the same words, same attitude, yet at first chance they pulverised me as if I were a stone on a stone crusher, so all I ask is for you not to do that to me, my love.
Fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice, it's all on me. Why try to fool me again? My heart's already withering...


The author's comments:

Me and storyteller were doing our expression thing and this showed up :) so I guess you could say it was another vent for me


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on Jun. 6 2015 at 12:30 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

thx for the feedback, I'll put it to use. Glad you enjoyed it and thx for reading :)

on Jun. 5 2015 at 1:31 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I like the idea, but I think it goes a little stream of consciousness. I'd recommend trying to stick closer to one specific idea/story instead of switching off every few paragraphs.

on May. 21 2015 at 1:17 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

Thx, and glad you enjoyed it XD

on May. 20 2015 at 6:27 pm
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Again, simply beautiful and very veryyy relatable

on May. 19 2015 at 11:50 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

thank you for reading :) glad you enjoyed it

on May. 19 2015 at 10:17 am
SugarLover127 SILVER, Hartville, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where is personal gain and perseverance without a couple failures?

This is really interesting. I never thought of things through this perspective. I love the "Someone forgot to factor in the unpredictability of females" line. I've always thought that all people were unpredictable in their own little way, but I can see how women are at times more so than men. Great work!

on May. 17 2015 at 6:27 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

thank you, taylor X3 I wasn't thinking this one would get much attention considering all of the mistakes I made in typing it up, but, at least I know that someone likes my small gift :) and I'm going to check out some more of yours lol Keep writing aswell :)

on May. 17 2015 at 2:06 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

"Someone forgot to factor in the unpredictability rate of females." This sentence is the reason I kept reading. x) You should take a look at Shakespeare's Sonnet 22; I had to use it as a class project and it has the same ideas encased in this piece by you... I've just figured out what I love about your writing, for real this time. It's all the rhetorical questions. You use them so often, and I just love, love, love them! I try all the time to input these into my own pieces, but they come out forced and make me sound like I'm less than 6 years old... There is your talent, Poet. Seems small, but it's fantastic in my eyes. Bravo. (: