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A Wish For Her    (Continued)

“Disgusting.” Lisa laughs.

“I bet she has all sorts of diseases.”

“I bet she’s wearing his sweatshirt. The one that smells as bad as he does.”

“I bet she’s gonna be one of those girls who never goes to college and ends up on the street.”

“I bet she’s gonna be a …” I look around to make sure no teachers are listening, “whore.”

That’s her new name. It spreads like a foul disease around the school, through the hallways, passed from one lip-gloss-smeared mouth to the next. Some kids just call her “The W,” or “The H” for the stupid ones who can’t spell. It’s what she is.

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12 comment(s)
Amazing writing. Amazing message.
May. 12, 2017 at 5:39 PM • Report
Its like really really good! Awesome job! Hey, why don't u right books for me ? lol!Or become an Author? That was awesome!
Mar. 29, 2017 at 8:41 PM • Report
I don't know what it means, but I like it.
Mar. 29, 2017 at 8:20 AM • Report
No, I think I do understand, after re-reading a couple times. Very nice.
Mar. 29, 2017 at 8:22 AM • Report
This story was really good!!!
Jan. 22, 2017 at 12:19 AM • Report
Apr. 11, 2016 at 1:32 PM • Report
It makes you wonder what problems all the freaks, weirdoes, crazies, emos, crybabies, angry people and attention-seeking drama queens and kings face at home.....
Feb. 05, 2016 at 8:18 PM • Report
Good work.. keep it up...Goodluck.:)
Dec. 01, 2015 at 5:11 AM • Report
Wow, thats an awesome fiction story! I need help with my story, so can you please help me? Or anyone?
Nov. 09, 2015 at 10:01 PM • Report
Wow I wasnt expecting the ending at all but that's why it's so great! Amazing story...would you mind commenting on some of my  work? Thanks!
Oct. 18, 2012 at 4:22 PM • Report