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My heart has the final
Push
And out roots all there is left, right, and wrong
Your favorite ice cream flavor
the way you kiss
“Remember how you couldn't help but smile before you tasted both?”
And it's done
I don't need
The table or the chair for support I will use my legs from now on walk on my own
Two feet
I will use my hands if I have to
I will race on my heart until
It stops dancing
Finally

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taylorbug
Hmm.. very interesting. I like it. The only line I do not understand is the one about not using the table for support any longer. Do you mean that you used to lean on him with all your problems, and now you have to walk on your own legs? I think that's what you meant. This is really great. There's lots of symbolism and figurative language in here. It' great. Great job. 4/5
Nov. 27, 2012 at 8:09 PM • Report
nakoLa
Thank you so much for your honest comment. The table and chair really represent anything external that hepled the speaker endure the time she waited on him...is it not clear? Maybe i should change that part?
Nov. 28, 2012 at 9:23 PM • Report
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