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humming This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

By marisafreedman, Sharon, MA

take me back
to the hours
when my eyelashes
would cut at
your frosty cheeks
and
we needn't rely
on bottles and
smoke
to make us
feel like
this.
tell me you
still feel like
this.
i still
feel like
this.



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2 comment(s)
taylorbug
Short, sweet, and to the point! I LoVE this! I live how you say your eyelashes "cut" against frosty cheeks; it brings out lots of mood, intended or not. Great job!!!
Nov. 26, 2012 at 7:06 PM • Report
marisafreedman
Thank you so much!!
Nov. 26, 2012 at 7:49 PM • Report
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