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...And now
I am wandering,
lost
and
confused.

There is a dark red liquid
coming from the walls
and a man
wearing a plain black suit
sitting up in bed,
finally realizing
his life was
a mistake.



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4 comment(s)
FlannelSkin
last stanza. epic.
Feb. 12, 2013 at 4:30 PM • Report
shapeshifter56
Not quite sure I understood it, but I like it. Somehow, it's really powerful. You can bet I'll be re-reading this sometime soon :)
Feb. 11, 2013 at 11:32 PM • Report
S.S.Splatters
How do you think this relates to weight?
Feb. 11, 2013 at 8:59 PM • Report
AmericanoLounge
Dunno, you tell me.
Feb. 12, 2013 at 9:26 PM • Report
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