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A Dangerous Game

Callie Z., Fishers, IN By Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time., Fishers, IN

It's cold where I keep
all my shame.
It's hard to play
a losing game.

I don't feel much,
I don't cry.
I won't help you,
I'll let you die.

And that's okay,
and that's alright.
I won't love you
out of spite.

But can't you hear me,
breaking, banging?
Against these stone-cold daggers,

All around me,
a dangling cage.
A precarious thing,
I made it — rage.

A feather's touch
could send them flying.
Towards the ground,
My strength is dying.

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24 comment(s)
amazing! i love it!
Jun. 11, 2013 at 9:57 AM • Report
This has a really unique writing style. I quite like it :)
Jun. 04, 2013 at 5:52 PM • Report
I love this so much!!! it's very well written.
May. 13, 2013 at 9:47 AM • Report
I love it!  There is a lot of emotion and it can gice off many different feelings to the people that read it!  Great Work Jade Keep Writing :)
Apr. 04, 2013 at 1:44 AM • Report
Aww thanks!!!!! You too, keep in touch :P
Apr. 04, 2013 at 2:03 AM • Report
i LOVE this. humanity has not yet invented words profound enough to convey the level of emotion this poem inspires in to put it simply it is infinitely magnificent!
Apr. 04, 2013 at 1:39 AM • Report
Thanks :) stay in touch
Apr. 04, 2013 at 2:02 AM • Report
wow i don't know whether to love it or be scraed of it lots of emotions  
Apr. 03, 2013 at 3:33 PM • Report
  Judging by the comments, this is clearly a very popular poem. It truly is a fantastic piece of writing, and although I usually am not much for love poems, I thought this one was very well and uniquely done. Great work!
Apr. 01, 2013 at 8:02 PM • Report
Thanks star :) :)
Apr. 02, 2013 at 1:10 PM • Report