Love & Hate
By Saintz-Flam3Rose, Jacksonville, FL
I live my life based of two things,
nothing more nothing less,
I with only two emotions,
Only two known notions,
They flow together greater then the ocean,
Sometimes one is felt greater then the other,
Theres no need for any other,
So i take no heed why bother,
sometimes having them both at once can be a smother,
I have only these because thier all i have to relate,
those two emotions are love and hate.
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I really like the theme of the poem and the way you threaded both together. There were some grammatical errors like capitalization and "then" should be "than".