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TeenInk "I'm a firm believer in Karma." - Emma Watson in Sofia Coppola's The Bling Ring featured at Cannes Film Festival... http://t.co/AtwVoR8xyT
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TeenInk "If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, don't remove it — I might be writing in my dreams." http://t.co/0FUP7fyJcB
In my opinion, we should stop publishing "Rapunzel" and start printing "Twins in the Tower" :)
Then, everyone will know the truth ;)
I LOVE IT! wow ! I never thought to add a twin to the repunzel story . So Creative Please write more Quickly but take your time make it as awesome as the other chaps
~CraZYWrIteR~
"I'm waiting, I'm waiting!"
"For what? And who are you, Spongebob?"
"Actually my name is Mara03851 and I am waiting for Mary_S. to put another chapter of her book out." "OMG, I love that book!" High Five!
So basically I'm trying to say, wonderful story, hopefully once you get this published and it's turned into a movie (no if's there!) then tangled will be old news :) I am also trying to say- Get out more chapters!
Great Story!
The beginning sounds like something the brother's Grimm would write. The intro, where it switches to Charlotte is good.
The description is great, and the witty banter is funny. I like Vincent, he seems like the typical, (tortured), charismatic character that often appears in the best teen literature.
I only have one comment: How does the mother know it's Charlotte? Is it because her silver hair is so distinctive? Or is it because the resemblance i... (more »)
Thanks! You're asking the right questions; you're exactly the kind of reader I love having. Her mom recognizes her because of the distinctive silver hair, but when I was telling my mom and several other mothers (aunts, older cousins, etc) they all said that even without the hair, it's not that hard to believe in a Mother's instinct. I don't know if I agree with that, though.
I can assure you, that was something I always planned on clarifying, just later in the story. Also, the plot is ... (more »)
I tried, but for some reason i just can't seem to get it posted. If you can't find them, then that's ok. They're just in the novel sections,
Away from Tragedy(realistic fic)
Among the Stars(romance fic)
Hands Stained Red(ACtion-adventure)
IN THE LIFE: A collection of Poems(other novels)
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