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I wanted to base this story on a rare thing that happens to some young girls to rais peoples awareness on it. :)Ys sorry about that i got all worked up in my writing and often forget! :O
More is coming!
I liked this story, it kind of freaked me out a little though. Is Chloe exceptionally beautiful, so all the older men want a go at her?
Also, somtimes in the first person you used 'he'. I know that can get confusing--I do it all the time!
I liked it. the ending was a bit unrealistic, but good. Is there more? I'd love to read it