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Unwilling Secrets
Summary: Lexie is lost in life. Moving from town to town she has never really discovered herself. Hiding from attention, and being a loner she doesn't mind her life. Until she meets someone who shows her just how special she is, and how dangerous her life really seems to be...
I'm trying to write as fast as possible. Sometimes I just get really distracted though which stinks :b i should have more up soon though!
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Fantastic, terrific, amazing, and synonyms alike!
You have done a great job with your characters and plot. I can't wait to read more!
Keep up the good work. :D
thank you! also if you have any critics I would love to hear them aswell(:
There's not much for you to improve on. You have a great plot and excellent dialogue.
If anything, pay more attention to sentence structure and punctuation. Try reading out loud to yourself--pausing at commas and stopping at periods-- to see how it sounds. If it sounds wrong, add punctuation where it will sound right. I hope this helps. :)
And please post more soon. I'm waiting...
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