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Author's note:
I decided to write this piece when my Creative Writing teacher told us to create an exciting...
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Eddie Long
I woke up the next morning and looked over at the woman next to me. My Olivia. If only you knew what I was going to do for you. I gently kissed her nose and those amazing green eyes fluttered open. Oh how I love you. She was sort of a plump woman, with red rosy cheeks and frizzy brown hair. But she was my world. I couldn’t imagine my life without her. What do you need in this world if you have love? Nothing. The truth? Money.
Elizabeth Lowe said...
Feb. 19 at 5:58 am:
Feb. 19 at 5:58 am:
Amie, this story is very well written.
I'm not ordinarily into mysteries but you had me hooked ─ I found myself turning page after page to read what would happen next.
As a former reporter and editor, it's my opinion that you have very promising writing skills.
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