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My Prince Charming
Summary: Lexi was all about her job, that she didnt even think about finding love. then one day, she met Ralph. It was a perfect fairy tale romance. till she saw his true colors. but it was too late, she had already fallen for him.
ReniseCasseusmaybe he was possessed? or someone was in his head
writerfreak21231
LOVED!!! It! Great job! (sorry for advertizing,) anyone if you could check out my stories called the beast and nightstalker that would be great!. Also, if u could post comments if liked it or not that would be great! I love helpful critszum and feedback! Thanks! and keep writing! :)(:
sheashea said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:51 pm:
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:51 pm:
wow thats all i can say
did he a mental thing going on????
PurpleWriter
veggiearthloverI really liked it, but I would have liked it more if the grammar was better!
bayleegurlI like it but grammatically its wrong... Also if he is an assistant he can't be making too much $... Fancy dinners wouldn't equate...
Mara03851I really like it, though I'm curious about why he did that. Was it some kind of mental disorder? Something he went through in his childhood? I really enjoyed it but all through the story I was hoping at the end it would say why he did what he did...
Thanks anyway for an amazing story!
RoseOzera said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 1:48 pm:
Jan. 22, 2011 at 1:48 pm:
this is a very powerful piece! it has a few grammatical, and puncuation errors, but other than that it was amazing, i am very sorry that you had to put up with this pretend prince charming. i havn't even been in anny relationships yet, but i can't even begin to imagine what an abusive relationshi must have felt like. im so so sooooo sorry. thank you for sharing your story with the world, and with me.
if you wouldn't mind, i would love for you to read my romance novel out ... (more »)
CameronG.
music-is-my-lifeum, idk if it was purposeful or not, but in the 2nd page, you have her name as Lisa, then Lexi. idk if anyone else caught that. sorry, im an english freak sometimes
WOW! I loved it!! Thanks so much! BTW I loved ending! What a twist! (:
BrokenInnocence said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 7:25 am:
Dec. 15, 2010 at 7:25 am:
ok love this. whens the next book??? i so want to read it. i mean i finished this in like 30 minutes and was so sad it ended. I want more!!!! :)
haha thanks. im working on it so it will be up before you know it!
Angie_101i really i want to kno what happen when she accisently bumped nto a new man..n i reaaly like your story:)
thank you angie. umm.. i was thinking about writing a second book telling about the next man she bumps into and maybe even having Ralph, the first man, come back to her one day and then she has to figure out what to do.. what do you think?
Yeah you should write the second book,n it would really make the story really good if Palph comes back n some how he tells her why he does wht he do whn he gets mad.and oh i think you should put that some how the new guy love the girl(i dont remember her name),n the girl like the new guy.
yea,thats a good idea...i will be waiting 4 iiiit!!!
PrincessSparkleThat was a bad ending. Really? It had to end like how it started? So unsatisfying.
FlawlessLawlessWell I have to differ with Princess Sparkle. I thought that was a great ending!! It pulled everything togather so gently and nicely that I was amazed!!!!! wow!
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