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I really like this! Is it the end? I hope not...
I how in the beginning the sentences were very choppy and short because she was so sad and her life was empty. It adds to the mood. One question, though, is the title Mary's Song like the Taylor Swift song called Mary's Song?
Maybe you could check out my realistic fiction novel, The Formation, and let me know what you think? Thanks :)