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Author's note:
Currently I'm still working on this story. I was inspired by Disney's Beauty and the Beast. I...
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Prologue
Thought a poem might set the begining well 
The Social Class Beast
As I watch him across the room at this feast.
His eyes glow red
And his wrists bleed
He’s like a vampire that always needs to feed.
He’s rude
And crude
Wanting people to fear him.
Yet, I love him
The Social Class Beast
As his eyes scan over me
And a smile forms across his face.
Making me feel like I’m in just the right place.
RaisaMiriThere will be more...right??? PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S MORE!!!!!!!! :)
good! i thought it might seem too repetitive xD and I know exactly what you mean about bad boys.
i actually like switching between two POV's...i think it just keeps things interesting! and it'll definitely work switching between KC and Misti! :)
and yeah, a story's always better with the mysterious bad boy character
Finally I started posting edited chapters!!!! ^-^ So far its just the chapter "New Guy" but its still a start. Hope you guys like it better :D
EpiclyawesomeThis is AMAZING! I absolutly love the plot and the way you describe it! EXCELLENT! Hey if you don't mind, could you read my book? It's called Demoness. I would greatly appreciate it.
glad you like it! ^-^ and sure I'll go check it out :D
glad you like it! ^-^ and sure I'll go check it out :D
Flashlevitation
I only read chapter 1. No offense, but I thought of your descriptions of high school as descriptions of middle school. They were childish and judgemental. people aren't in those particular groups in High school anymore because (keyword) we've GROWN UP
Shaded114I don't know what highschool you go to, but high school kids are definitely not what I'd consider grown up. And I still find that these cliques are very common in high school too.
MaryTDMy high school had 68 kids this year. We don't have cliques and groups because there aren't enough of us to do that.
In my school its kind of like a zoo, because its the environment that is most common to me, thats what I'm trying to describe.
Ok I have revised the begining of this story and will post better chapters in a bit.
new chapter posted!! I know its short, but im still editing the first 12 chapters.
PrincessSparkleStari literally check for more every other day! i love this so much! Keep up the amazing writing! please check out my poem, too!
I know everyone's anxious to find out what happens next. I'm sorry I didn't put any new chapters up yet, I was on winter break. Tomorrow I'm posting some new chapters and I hope you get to read them soon after...As for your poem, I'll read them soon!! ^-^
BluBirdWriter13
IMunlovedU MUST ADD MORE NOW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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