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By , Fort Mill, SC
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Obsessive and Controlling
Summary: Daniel has fallen so deeply in love with Katie he cannot do a thing about it. And Katie is flattered by it. But something goes haywire and a nightmare hits the gas headed for a deep cliff, taking Katie with it.

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freeflow23 said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 1:14 pm:
This was okay, but it didn't seem finished. It had some grammar issues and felt too rushed. Maybe spend more time describing each chapter so the reader can understand what's going on.
 
quiet1 replied...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 8:54 pm :
It's rushed like that because that's what the relationship felt like. I know that sounds bad but it's true. It's not quite done I have about a year left of info to do. Sorry about the grammar. I'm not the best speeler
 
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