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April Fresh
March 17, 2011
Summary:
“Hey so you new around here?” He asked. I raised an eyebrow, but answered, “Just moved from California.” He seemed surprised. “Really? That’s so cool.” The guy’s friends called his name. They were yelling Jake. “Nice name.” I commented. “Can I know yours?” He asked me. I thought about it for a second. Should I really tell some guy I just met my real name? I decided what that heck. “April.” I replied.
Tiffany G.
April Fresh
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writerchik_123 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 5:02 pm
Lol. No problem. Two new coming your way this week!
aubreyflsom said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 12:33 am
write more its sooo good!
AKwritten said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 5:48 pm
I really love this book i can't wait for more, if this was published and in bookstores i would just read it all in one day- keep on writing ;)
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 12:49 pm
More, I need more! D:
writerchik_123 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 2:30 pm
I posted a new chapter! I hop you guys like it. This week I'm posting two more!
writerchik_123 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 2:23 am
Yeah sorry sometimes I have that problem. I'm glad that you liked it!
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2011 at 3:25 pm
"this" as in- "this nice desk" "this really cool magnetic board", etc., just to clarify
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2011 at 3:22 pm
You are developing the story nicely, I like the characters, and the foreshadowing is a nice touch. One thing that kind of irkes me is that you keep on using "this". It makes your writing seem less mature and the character superficial, I guess that's the effect it has on me. Otherwise, great!
writerchik_123 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 4:00 pm
Thanks! and I really like Jake too. lol :)
mal12 said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 12:24 am
i really like your story! you do a good job of giving each of the characters their own personalities. Jake's my favorite :)
keep writing and ide love to read more of your story soon! 5 stars!
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