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What I Lost at the Lake
Summary: When Elli and Sam meet, they realize they have a connection. They have little time though. Noah's annual 4th of July bash is tomorrow. Sam is friends with Noah. Noah notorious for a temper is dating Elli. Elli, quiet, mysterious, and alluring has caught Sam by his heartstrings. In 1 day, Sam will experience living, loving, and losing.
nemish23short and sweet yet very sad :(
i love it! you could stretch the story out for longer though, you know, building suspense and stuff.
Thanks so much for reading! Also, thank you for the feedback. When i get some time to work on the story i hope i can develop the characters more. Maybe then you can come check it out again! (:
Bookworm1998
so sad :( this was good, though some longer chapters to support their feelings for each other would be better
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