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Helen M. P.
Adrift
Summary: Young Andria gets lost at sea and picked up by a crew of pirates. Lucky for her they want nothing from her but to put her to work. On the ship she meets the love of her life, Christopher Hussend. She soon realizes that she must get back to help her family and has to make a choice between the loyalty to her family and staying with her lover boy.

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FallenAngel170198This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9 at 9:51 am:
This is brilliant yet so sad. Did andria get killed by the guy that she slept with at the hotel or what? Poor christopher and andria. You should of made it more happy :(
 
nelehjrThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 10 at 11:20 am :
That's so sweet of you! Thanks!

No, Andria didn't get killed by the guy she slept with. I like to believe she pined away for Christopher and just happened to realize this with that man...Then again after his death she became a tramp so...She might have been sick.
 
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nemish23 said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 5:11 am:

um... wow!

i love the setting and the idea, but the story itself could use some work.

you know, like maybe defining the story line a little and making it a little longer. but it's cool and i love the idea of a pirate romeo and juliet.

and check out some of my work too? :)

 
nelehjrThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 3:03 pm :

Thank you so much for actually comenting!

This is actually one of those things that I would have set on fire if it weren't for a freind, so I dont really want to pick it back up and edit it some more.

However I am glad you like it. What specifically needs work?

 
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