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That is so cute! I love it, but I think it could use some improvement on character development, especially.
Also, I didn't understand some of stuff that happened in the middle so I think you should make the plot clearer.
But I loved the idea of the months and 365 days! Great job!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Can I trouble you for a more specific explanation of what wasn't clear to you? Maybe I can help clear some stuff up. Thanks x Bri