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Night Hunter's Hope

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Devon B.
Night Hunter's Hope
Summary: The empire of Heartfall is on the verge of danger. Rumor has is that King David, the ruler of Heartfall, has left the palace alone to search for powerful weapons scattered across the land, but no one is certain why. Fear and outrage soon envelop the citizens of Heartfall once news of the "Ones Most Feared" have returned as foretold, to wreak havoc among the people. Meanwhile, Crimson the young woodcutter, shortly after becoming a damned creature of the night and murdering his own mother, he is stranded in Valor Cave for what feels like ages before a wandering king discovers his location. In exchange for his cure, Crimson agrees to travel with the king to help fight the merciless dragons and stop the terrible war. They face their destiny, in which the fate of an entire kingdom lies as well.

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MayaS.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 23, 2012 at 10:42 pm:
Chapters 2-3: Wow. I didn't read the summary because I wanted to be surprised, and holy guacamole I was. I loved your descriptions - especially about some glowing plants in chapter 2, and when he discovers his new appearance in chapter 3. The whole time I was like, "The poor guy!" There must be a cure! Right.....? Please more soon!
 
devonunorthodox25This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 4:46 pm :
Wow! Thank you so much! You don't know how much positive comments like that mean toi me :) I will post more soon!
 
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devonunorthodox25This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11, 2012 at 4:43 pm:
Yes I did, it was fantastic :) 
 
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MayaS.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 3:05 pm:
P.S. Post more soon!
 
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MayaS.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 3:04 pm:
Awesome world-building and eloquant descriptions. (Also, can I name my baby Crimson? That might just be the best hero name ever.) My only comments are that the conversation between Crimson and Aron was maybe too long and I was getting "Eragon" vibes throughout.
 
devonunorthodox25This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 10, 2012 at 9:08 pm :
Thank you very much! :) Yes, I was obsessed with the Eragon series, so I might have accidentaly conspired some of Paolini into the writing. But I will try to be very careful next time! 
 
MayaS.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 11, 2012 at 11:15 am :
"Eragon" was like my childhood. Did you read the final book that came out recently?
 
devonunorthodox25This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 11, 2012 at 4:44 pm :
Yes I did, it was fantastic :)
 
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