Teen Ink

this is a really good book i have always been into werewolfs and vampires keep up the work

what had hit her i need to know what happens! grr. this is a great story. cnt wait for more.

I loved this story!!!! You need to post more.

OMG!!!! Please post more!!!!

This is an amazing storyline. Not cliched, and in no way boring. I encourage you to keep writing and finish this novel. However, this writing was more note like, did you intead to do that?

I am honestly curious because I have seen many writng styles. If it isn't intentional, and you want to make it more 'flowy', try using more commas and connecting more sentences.

Like I said before, this is an awesome story line, I can't wait to read the big plan (though I will pr... (more »)

WOW! This so awesome! Five out of five! You have heaps of talent!   By the way, can you please comment on my novel? Thanks if you do.

I LOVE this piece last night i stayed up until 2:00 reading it. Im excited about the nxt one. Please read and comment on the book tht will be posted soon! and the pieces i already have it would mean alot. thanks!

It's a very good premise, despite how much it's been done already.  I really do admire how well you introduced the characters---that's something I always struggle with.  Just make sure you proofread more and check everything more than thrice.  Also, there was a mention of a "Mitchell" when Sid drives Marnie back to school.  Really good.  Keep up the good work!

AHHHHHHHHH MORE MORE MOE I WANNA READ MORE PLEASE FINISH SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT <3

Great story. It's very easy to see that you put a lot of time and effort into writing this! Keep it up and you should write more but just one thing...watch the time scale but besides that well done!

This is very good. you should keep on writing. :-)

While vampire stories are over done i still enjoyed yours very much  keep writing  could you please take a look at and comment on my story Manso's Shame

This has gret potential for a VERY RAW manuscript if you add more detail, makingthe chapters longer and mabey a few more interesting climax sense leading up to infor mation instead of hitting us BANG in the head with it. and it also seemed a little cramed in for the time line. but It could become the next best thing to Twilight. NO JOKE!!!! but then again IT IS VERY VERY VERY RAW its good i was getting some ideas, to make it GREAT. keep it up if you plan on finishing the story . you co... (more »)

love it! vampires are awesome.

I love this book!  It was amazing

OMG u HAFTA write more! Its the awesomest story on Teenink! EVER! I'm going to send the link to EVERYBODY I know- cuz I think THIS should be the next Twilight!!!!!!

this is probably the only vampire story i've read that i liked :)) actualy i liked it A LOT! it had me hooked from the beggining! please write more!!!!!!!!

I love it! It has the mystery and love and VAMPIRES!!!!!!! Plllleeeaaase write more!