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By lovelycheese, Cupertino, CA

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Celestial

Summary: Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.

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Pandora118 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 5:03 pm:

i thought it was very interesting. i luv all fantasy novels but this has to be one of my favorites!

lovelycheese replied...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 9:27 pm :

Thanks so much! Your comment really means a lot to me. I was thinking about taking a break on this novel (already was, actually) to do some nonfiction writing. However, I think I'm going to continue now(; I didn't think people were still reading this book, especially since the novel fantasy section has the most books.

Thank youu!

Pandora118 replied...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 10:50 pm :

I think you have some skill. If you enjoyed writing that, I think you may have just found your voice. It was truly awesome.

lovelycheese replied...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 11:04 pm :

Thanks, I'd been hoping someone would say that. :]

And, if it didn't bother you too much, could you read my realistic fiction article called Dear Juliet? It was approved yesterday and I'm not getting many views; I'd appreciate some feedback. Thanks(:

Pandora118 replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 9:04 am :

Sure if it doesn't bother you to read my fiction article Northern Slave. It was approved yesterday and I would like some feedback. It's hard to find so I would use the search box

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mudpuppy said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:08 pm:

Interesting. I love how you use more modern dialogue so that the reader can relate to the characters better. I love any type of fantasy with a more modern feel to it. Five out of five.

lovelycheese replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 10:58 pm :

Thanks!

I was aiming for a more timeless setting, and I didn't want to get too much mixed up with old-fashioned writing. I appreciate your rating(:

I'm not sure when I can post again, because I'm stuck between school craziness. I'd like to get at least five chapters done before I do submit it to the editors.

Again, thanks for the feedback!(:

mudpuppy replied...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 9:20 pm :

I understand what you mean, school is keeping me pretty busy, too. :) But still nice story.

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Coffee said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 4:02 pm:

I thoguht it was pretty good, written exremely well.

I like the element thing. I think that it's kind of predictable though, at least for now. And the girl hunting with a bow thing is just a little but cliche. But I did think it was good, and I encourage you to write more. :)

lovelycheese replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 11:57 pm :

Yeah, I'm trying to throw in some unexpected twists to the story to make it less predictable. Although I'm not sure what you mean by the cliche part? I might take that part out, though.

Thanks for the feedback!(:

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