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Celestial
Summary: Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.



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BleedingTearsCryingBlood said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 3:37 pm:
This book has real potential I beleive with some work it could be published
 
lovelycheese replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 10:41 pm :

Thank you!

I'm thinking about submitting a revised version of chapter one. I'll have to edit it first, though. (:

 
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Chaday1911 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 4:04 pm:
I love it! It is a wonderful book you should publish it because i would buy it and read it over and over again!
 
lovelycheese replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 10:57 pm :
Thank you! Publishing - that's the first anyone's mentioned yet. I'm not yet looking into publishing, but I certainly hope so in the future.
 
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MoandBrowniegirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 5:47 pm:
This is a really cool story! I love the parallels you drew between our society and fantasy. Your imaging is also really incredible (I love the descriptions, especially the one of the bedroom.) Congrats on being a great writer!
 
lovelycheese replied...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 10:13 pm :
Whew, that's what I was aiming for. I was hoping I could relate the Celestial world to the actual world. Thanks so much.(:
 
MoandBrowniegirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 10:04 am :
I would really like to read more of your stuff (I love Fantasy stuff). Have you tried posting to the novels section? And have you written anything else I could read? Because this is like only having a bite of cake. I'd love more!
 
lovelycheese replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 10:54 pm :

Hmm. Now that you mention it, I might just start off another novel. I have another idea in mind, but I don't know where it'll go.
This draft of Celestial is very early and I've tons of changes. Like my description and stuff. Kind of overloaded. I'm reading a book called "The Book On Writing" (nice title, huh?) and boy, I learned a lot. I will delete these current chapters and post updated versions sometime in the future. I can notify you if you want. :D

I'd love to read s... (more »)

 
MoandBrowniegirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 7:02 am :

That all sounds great! Good luck on the next project, and on the editing of this one (although in my opinion it doesn't need much).

Thank you for offering to read my work! I've tried a novel on this site (Big Sink Purple). If you could read that and give a bit of constructive criticism, that would be amazing!

Thanks again!

 
lovelycheese replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 11:46 am :
No problem. I prefer doing free reads, anyway. :D I'll do my best to critique your novel!(:
 
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sunshine04 said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 1:57 am:

i read the whole and i loved it 

it was excellent

 
lovelycheese replied...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 11:03 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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Raven_Mi said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 8:28 am:

amazing, its the 1st novel ive red on teen ink and it will b hard to find one better

cant w8 4 more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)

 
lovelycheese replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 6:34 pm :
Thanks, that means a world to me. I don't believe I'll be posting anymore on Teen Ink, though I'll probably submit the most current work on Inkpop. Consider this as some type of teaser trailer. :D
 
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sunshine04 said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 11:25 pm:
i have read till the first chapter and that built of pages and all the description are great  loved it
 
lovelycheese replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 6:28 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
sunshine04 replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 1:44 am :

can i know whats your username there so that i can ead your work and please tell me how do u write such books

because whenever i start to write i don't have a subject and i go blank

 
sunshine04 replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 1:49 am :

how do u write such great work beause hwenever i start to write i go blank and i don't have any subject or topic to write about

i speacially liked your book because i like magic nd sorts like that 

when i read the whole book i 'll tell u more about it 

whats ur usename in inkpop so that i can ead ur work mine is june1997 although i haven't posted anyhing

 
lovelycheese replied...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 11:38 pm :

Actually, I'm deleting my Inkpop account temporarily- I've already submitted a request but I've no idea how long it takes for them to process it. As of now, my username's bitterandsweet but I'd like a different username. When I have my new account, I'll message you and we'll talk more then. (:

To me, the process always begins with reading. Need some grammar / punctuation help? Read a book. Confused on how to write flowing, natural dialogue? Read a book. That's the best advice I ca... (more »)

 
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lovelycheese said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 1:03 pm:

I don't know why I didn't realize this earlier. In the Prologue, (which I'm keeping) I put the pendant as ruby. But in Chapter One, I put 'emerald' pendant. My mistake, guys. My mind went off somewhere(:

On the progression of the novel: I going to be away for the next week and will most likely be busy juggling school work and extracurricular activities, so I don't know when I can work on Celestial. However, I made an Inkpop account recently and plan to submit the first 10,000 words of ... (more »)

 
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