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Morning Orange

I spotted Gia up ahead. She hadn’t gotten far at all, and although she was hobbling as quickly as she could, she had only made it halfway through the woods. Ori was slowing me down. I was almost dragging him, because his little legs could only move so fast. The Police were smart enough not to run after us on foot. I heard them stepping into Hovers.

Ori and I had almost reached the forest. I could see Gia, and she saw the alarm in my eyes. I started to cough, but I forced my legs to move. I yanked my brother alongside me.

I wanted to cry when I heard their Hovers stir to life. Even the simplest mental math revealed that we had no way to outrun them. But now we had entered the forest.

Gia had stopped on the other side.

I shouted, “Go! Gia, run!”

The Hovers were right behind us. I’d never seen them navigate through trees before.

“Run, Ori!”

We froze. I tried to move. I used all my strength, but my muscles were like molasses, and what little motion I could make did not move my body at all. It took me a moment to recognize that pitch ringing in my ears. Only then did I notice that I was suspended above the ground. My neck bent as slowly as honey drops from a jar. My whole body was glowing orange. I had been shot by float gun. Even without turning my head, I knew my brother had been too.

I prayed that Gia would escape. But the other Hover went straight toward her, and she froze by herself, simply out of fear. They floated her anyway. That was the last thing I remembered.




I awoke in an Auto. Ori drooled on my arm, asleep, his hands bound just like mine. I was extremely uncomfortable. They hadn’t bothered to take off our packs before they bound our wrists. On my left Gia was wide awake. Her eyes flitted around the Auto, intently staring out the window and at the Policemen’s faces. She had a determined look on her face, an intensity characteristic of her. She was learning everything she could, and her motives were unmistakable.

She shot me a warning glance that told me to keep quiet. I looked out the window. The lights that I guessed to be National City were just a speck on a dark horizon. The sky had a look of early morning. I knew that soon the sun would rise.

The Policemen laughed. One of them sipped a beverage from a mug.

“A royal pain, that one,” the driver joked.

The other nodded. “Without a doubt. But she has a plan for everything.” He almost whispered when he added, “I’d be afraid contradict her.”

Ori woke with a start. “Arcana,” he whimpered, “where are we?”

The driver turned around, “Well look who’s up!” He was eerily cheerful.

The other swallowed. I almost jumped when I realized that I recognized him. He knew my dad.

Gia addressed the second, and I knew that she recognized him too. “Where are we going?”

He didn’t answer. The driver grinned. “We’re going on a little adventure. You’re going farther from the National City than you’ve ever been!”

“How far are we, exactly?” Gia asked politely, still addressing the second Policeman.

The driver laughed. “Nearly a thousand miles, kids! And what do you know? Here’s our stop.” Traveling at top speed an Auto could cover about 250 miles per hour. I tried to recall my geography, but I had thought that all this was just wasted space.

The Auto landed quickly.

“All right you kids, out!” the driver said with a wide grin.

Obediently, we grabbed our bags and slowly descended to the ground. I hugged Ori to my side as best I could with my hands bound together.

The first Policeman rolled down his window as the second opened his door. He approached us, carrying a weapon meant for only one purpose. The three of us faced the two of them, and I shuddered in a moment of terrible understanding.

“Alright kids,” the first Policeman said out the window. “Everyone turn around.”

Ori looked up at me.

“Kids, turn around now.”

Gia interrupted, softly. She looked at the second man only, undaunted by the gun. “What’s going to happen to us, Mr. Lumberton?” That was his name! I had been trying to remember.

He seemed startled that she knew it.

Mr. Lumberton muttered something incoherent.

“Turn around!” the first Policeman barked, clearly annoyed at Lumberton’s lack of professionalism. “Pete, just do it.”

“Mr. Lumberton,” Gia said softly. “Are you going to kill us?”

Mr. Lumberton rubbed his temple, but then returned his hand to his weapon.

“Shut up!” the first Policeman yelled. “Pete just get it -- ”

But he never finished his sentence. Lumberton pushed a button on his uniform and his colleague fell unconscious on the controls.

I had no idea he had it in him. Mr. Lumberton stepped back. Apparently neither did he.

“Run!” he muttered to us, wiping his dripping brow, and quickly he returned to the Auto and started tapping away at the controls.

We didn’t hesitate. I never looked back as we darted into the trees.

It was difficult to run without the balance of our arms, but we managed to sprint until we were well out of sight.

The sun just peeked over the horizon and brilliant streaks painted the sky. I felt the cautious freedom of the nearly rising sun. Mr. Lumberton had to have known the danger he made for himself. Ori and Gia were both safe! We had all survived! I smiled to myself. I supposed the world does seem darkest just before the dawn.

A loud voice made Ori jump. “Nobody move!” A huge dark figure stepped out from the trees. His weapon was loaded. His tone left no room for argument. “You’re all coming with me.”
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randumfaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 9:10 am:

This is a cool story. I'm only halfway through right now, I just finished chapter six. I noticed a few flaws, but not many. One was the pace was slightly too fast for my taste, because, think about it this way: when you go to barnes and noble or borders and buy a nice new book, it will take a while to get into the action, but in here, it's pretty much just the first chapter and then bang comes the action. Likewise between action, such as when Arcana and her siblings escape the police, it take... (more »)

 
randumfaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 2:42 pm :
Well... I kept reading a little bit, and they have guns... so scratch that :p
 
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Eisdnyl14 said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 11:36 am:
This is great! You are very talented, well done!
 
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RhythmAndRhyme said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 11:16 am:

I spent days reading this over and over again. The plot haunted me throughout the instances when I was not reading the actual words. This was extremely well written, and I'd love if you continued the story!

I almost feel bad saying that I couldn't actually find anything to remedy with constructive criticism. I feel that way because someone might think that I'm only making them feel good when there's actually something there to fix. In this instance, that is not true! This work was trul... (more »)

 
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Midnight_Hum This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 8:21 am:
Wow...
I'm sorry I took so long to comment.  I searched for 'White Ribbon' and I couldn't find it, then Teen Ink re-added the 'My Contributions' thingy and I was able to find it instantly.
Just for the record, I NEVER reply to comments asking me to read their story. But you compared my story to "The Lady or the Tiger" which not only flattered me and made my big head swell, but also impressed me that you had heard of it.
Because that was definitely an inspiration to my story.<... (more »)
 
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Midnight_Hum This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 8:20 am:

Wow...

I'm sorry I took so long to comment.  I searched for 'White Ribbon' and I couldn't find it, then Teen Ink re-added the 'My Contributions' thingy and I was able to find it instantly.

Just for the record, I NEVER reply to comments asking me to read their story. But you compared my story to "The Lady or the Tiger" which not only flattered me and made my big head swell, but also impressed me that you had heard of it.

Because that was definately an inspiration to m... (more »)

 
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lalagirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 24, 2011 at 5:03 pm:
This is sooo great! The world you've made is captivating and keeps me wanting more. Keep writing!
 
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becauseHeloves said...
May 23, 2011 at 9:44 am:
This is GOOD. I'm eagerly awaiting more chapters!
 
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flyingpinkgiraffes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 2:56 pm:
Oh wow this has to be one of the best BOOKS ive read.  i mean im comparing it to profesional published books, not books on teenink!
 
EmilyGram replied...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 4:06 pm :
Thank you so much!  Your comment really motivates me to write.  I appreciate it so much.  Thank you :)
 
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Gabby J. said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 8:15 pm:
Wow, i'm pretty new to teenink, but this is one of the best things I have looked at! I love how suspenseful it is, I can't wait for the next chapters!
 
EmilyGram replied...
Apr. 24, 2011 at 10:39 pm :

Thank you!  I'm glad you like it and that you commented!

 

 
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Medina D. said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 9:02 am:
hey Emily! i know its random, but I'm really serious i had a weird dream last night.............i was seeing titles of published books from teenink writers, and the one i remember (from seeing your novel on the front page of novels) was  "White ribbon" I'm not joking AT ALL. :) Have a good day!! This book is awesome
 
EmilyGram replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 11:12 am :
haha that's awesome! :) I'm glad you shared that with me!
 
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Violets said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 12:29 pm:

OMG this was totally awesome!!! This shoudl be a book...i would totally buy it!!!!!

 

 
EmilyGram replied...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 7:30 pm :
Thank you so much.  Your feedback really helps to motivate me to keep writing!
 
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wordjunkie said...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 6:07 pm:
Written well and descriptive! I couldn't read the whole thing, but I loved what  did.
 
EmilyGram replied...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 7:29 pm :
I'm glad you like it so far!  Please keep reading and let me know what you think :)
 
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jbaker0184 said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 12:43 pm:
Very Interesting story Emily.  I realy liked where you went with it.  My name is Jake and I want you to stay in touch with me.  I may need help with my novel.
 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 3:04 pm :
Hi Jake!  I would love to help you out with your novel!  That's what this site is for :)  Any specific feedback you can give me about White Ribbon so far would be greatly appreciated as well!
 
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