Teen Ink

Is it sad we have rewrote this 7 times? Beginning to end, and we are rewriting it again! This time we will succeed! I hope...

It's good, but you should add more character. If this was a prologe, you could get away with it, but in chapter 1, you need to define your character quickly, and with detail.

It's really funny because this is our fifth time of rewriting it and we still don't have an ending!

Thanks! This is a rough copy and a co-authored book. My friend and I have rewritten it a few times and plan on uploading the final product whenever it may be ready. Thanks so much :) I'll totally check out your work!

I looooooove this! I initially read it because I saw the word "Shifter" and "Prophecy", which is what my novel, Scarred is about, and it struck my curiousity. (Don't worry though--your story and mine are completely different.) I love your style of writing, and this piece grabbed my attention from the very beginning. Nice work...this gets five stars! If you'd be interested, hop on over to my page to read about an entirely different side to Shifters :D.

We are working on you summerizing skills ASAP. And then, we will fix your summary. ;)

BTW: If you don't know who this is, take a good look at the name.