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The experiments
Summary: Vee Heart is kind hearted and goodwilled. Can she really be a murderor? Is the only other girl her age out to get her?
Gleekgurl said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 1:33 pm:
Jan. 21, 2012 at 1:33 pm:
This book is really good and I could relate to the main character very well! ;))
NNNEEEOOO11 If I could favorite this, I would... (But the button won't appear for novels)...
I am addicted to LOST, one of the greatest shows ever made (in my opinion), and I could not help but feel the same enchantment through your words that LOST showed to to me in every episode. Description, origionality, and plot twists were masterful in this epic story. I was amazed with every paragraph, and I can only hope that you will professionally publish this one day. Besides a lack in flow between chapters 5 and 6 (the alien part was a little sudden and unexplained) I love... (more »)
Thank you, some of the others who read my book have often felt confused about the alien part aswell, it was just that i was so excited i wanted it done, i am currently writing two sequels and trying to get them up here, the 2nd is called the experiments - fearless, but it doesn't fearture Vee
I cannot wait for your next novel! Yeah, I understand how you feel. Sometimes we just need to rush an idea out before it's lost, or we are just too excited to do anything but hurry and bring it to life in words. I still need to edit and improve a few novels of my own. Would you mind reading one such writing, a short story that I wrote last year? It's called "My Netherworld", and it is a dark fantasy piece of mine. Just click on my profile and select it. I would like a great writer such as ... (more »)
UNserieswritervery good writng! i hate that decent writers like us are overlooked, while overrated writers with mediocre ideas and no understanfing of the craft are boosted to top ten!
Supremequeen said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:57 pm:
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:57 pm:
V.good we want more we want more we want more < multiplied by a zillion..!!!
Wolvo Majella said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 1:37 pm:
Dec. 4, 2011 at 1:37 pm:
A great story- captivating and engaging from the start! Utterly enjoyable.
Hey love this! your writing pure rocks..you writing anymore chocfrog?
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