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The experiments

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Isolation

I breathed in the warm, moist air. Normally I would have loved it here; the palm trees, coconuts, the nature and the company. After a week I began to get bored. Right now I settled for drawing swirls in the sand, and asking myself the impossible question – what if we never leave? The men were out in the sea trying to catch more fish. I was a vegetarian, ever since I was little, but now I had no choice and I felt incredibly guilty about it.
Sienna walked over to me looking strangely perky. “Get up” she announced “Sure, why?” “Wood for tonight”. I stood up and we made our way for the forest/ jungle, I tripped a few times, but Sienna was so graceful and quick. We were walking for at least half an hour, I felt like a winging child but I had to ask...”Are we nearly there yet” I asked quietly, after all I only know her eleven days. She turns and rolls her eyes at me “Yes, Vee, almost there” and as soon as the last word was out of her mouth I saw it. Wood. Trees that were cut down. Branches neatly cut. No dirt around the place like all the other clearings. No animal droppings.
Humans were here before us. It might’ve been a good thing or a bad thing. A good thing if they got of this island and bad thing if they died. As if reading my mind she said “We’ll go see tomorrow, don’t tell anyone” “Why?” but I knew anyway, it could be bad. We could find it to be a very bad thing. I thought of how it would feel to discover dead bodies, I’d rather not, but we had to know.
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Gleekgurl said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 1:33 pm:
This book is really good and I could relate to the main character very well! ;))
 
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Chocoholic101 said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 1:30 pm:
This is really great! Lovee it!!
 
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NNNEEEOOO11 said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 7:03 pm:
   If I could favorite this, I would... (But the button won't appear for novels)...
 
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NNNEEEOOO11 said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
   I am addicted to LOST, one of the greatest shows ever made (in  my opinion), and I could not help but feel the same enchantment through your words that LOST showed to to me in every episode. Description, origionality, and plot twists were masterful in this epic story. I was amazed with every paragraph, and I can only hope that you will professionally publish this one day. Besides a lack in flow between chapters 5 and 6 (the alien part was a little sudden and unexplained) I love... (more »)
 
Chocolatefrog replied...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 10:49 am :
Thank you, some of the others who read my book have often felt confused about the alien part aswell, it was just that i was so excited i wanted it done, i am currently writing two sequels and trying to get them up here, the 2nd is called the experiments - fearless, but it doesn't fearture Vee
 
NNNEEEOOO11 replied...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 12:54 pm :
I cannot wait for your next novel! Yeah, I understand how you feel. Sometimes we just need to rush an idea out before it's lost, or we are just too excited to do anything but hurry and bring it to life in words. I still need to edit and improve a few novels of my own. Would you mind reading one such writing, a short story that I wrote last year? It's called "My Netherworld", and it is a dark fantasy  piece of mine. Just click on my profile and select it. I would like a great writer such as ... (more »)
 
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C. said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 6:27 am:
thankyou very much!
 
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C. said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 4:35 am:
Thank you very much!
 
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UNserieswriter said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 4:49 pm:
very good writng! i hate that decent writers like us are overlooked, while overrated writers with mediocre ideas and no understanfing of the craft are boosted to top ten!
 
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Supremequeen said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:57 pm:
V.good we want more we want more we want more < multiplied by a zillion..!!! 
 
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Chocolatefrog said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:00 pm:
Thanks, i am going to write more soon
 
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Wolvo Majella said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 1:37 pm:
A great story- captivating and engaging from the start!  Utterly enjoyable. 
 
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christmastreelover said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 11:42 am:
Hey love this!  your writing pure rocks..you writing anymore chocfrog?
 
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