The Perfect Soldier

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By Alec.M.Strong, Kent, WA

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Alec.M.Strong

The Perfect Soldier

Summary: Matt Miller, a teenage boy living on a small Island of Verosha, living with his brother and dad, are put into a fight for their lives when Vigilance targets Verosha.

Matt and his friends aim to take down the Vigilance army before it's too late. Can anyone stop the ruthless Vigilance Dictator Vilroy?

A futuristic war tale of family, life, death, betrayal, lies, and deception.

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writer112358 said...
Jul. 9, 2012 at 8:03 pm:

I agree. It's a good story, but don't tell as much. Show the reader the same information in the first page as part of the progression of the plot.

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gavinbob said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 12:10 pm:

I really like the names and vocabulary. Perhaps you could not explain so much in the first page. Maybe just get into it a little slower. Explain everything on the way; as the plot is progressing.

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fk[s said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 9:35 am:

Too much information on the first page.

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