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Nox Virtus
Summary: When high school senior Roy Lions' life takes a drastic, dark turn in a helpless instant, he sets off to do the only thing he's known he wants to do with his life. Its a stressful, constant trek into the perilous unknown for Roy as he molds himself into the most impossible thing to be in the real world: a super hero.

Tags: school self-esteem death/loss health nature


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May 22 at 10:22 pm:
It's not bad, but a little confusing at times. The descriptions and spacing--such as pressing enter after each quote of dialogue--would make it a lot easier to read and tell who is talking. And perhaps it would help to add a bit of the main character's background to the beginng, because at the first chapter, the reader is just kind of like, "uh... who's this kid? Why should I care about him?" Remember; strong characters can carry a weak plot, but a strong plot cannot carry ... (more »)
 
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TorakageThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2 at 1:40 pm:
This is really cooleo!  
 
EmmettHerculeLaFaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2 at 1:58 pm :
Thanks so much! More to come soon.
 
SunballSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 18 at 10:04 pm :
i really luv this
 
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