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Th Asylum

June 13, 2011
By IncorrectlyWired GOLD, Milford, Virginia
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IncorrectlyWired GOLD, Milford, Virginia
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"No great genius has ever existed without some touch of madness." - Aristotle

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This is my deepest and most philosophical work. It's short-ish, but it has chapters so I did this category. He hears about secrets, sounds, light, justice, and words from the mouths of madmen, and begins to question the madness of their claims.

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SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 11:20 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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This was beautiful, disturbing, and all to true! The way you write electrifies and makes you think. Utterly, Completely, Amazing!
IncorrectlyWired GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 10:44 pm
IncorrectlyWired GOLD, Milford, Virginia
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&quot;No great genius has ever existed without some touch of madness.&quot; - Aristotle

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except that it's not really dialogue... it's more of a monologue. I did it intentionally, this story is about the point, not realism or even the "plot." Thank you for the imput, I hate when people just say "OMG! THIS IS SOOO GOOD! <3" Even if I disagree, you obviously thought about it.
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 8:17 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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This was a chilling book.  It's an interesting read and I really enjoyed it.  I know it's hard, but by making the dialogue a little bit shorter could also make it more realistic.  Other than that, good job!