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Vampire Goddess
Summary: "The less you know about me, the better everything will turn out."I told him.
"But, there's something different about you! What is it!"He asked, his eyes pleading.
I held up my hands, pain in my mouth.
"Nothing!"I snapped.
I spun around and dashed back inside, my fangs slid over my teeth and bottom lip. I felt thirsty, I needed blood. I slid down the wall and groaned. I was so weak. I was so hungry. I closed my eyes and groaned in hunger again. I needed to feed.
"But, there's something different about you! What is it!"He asked, his eyes pleading.
I held up my hands, pain in my mouth.
"Nothing!"I snapped.
I spun around and dashed back inside, my fangs slid over my teeth and bottom lip. I felt thirsty, I needed blood. I slid down the wall and groaned. I was so weak. I was so hungry. I closed my eyes and groaned in hunger again. I needed to feed.
ShyKarma
love the story could you write more chapters
Of course!!!! not a problem!! As soon as I am able, I will!!!!
you should write more i want to know what will happen next :)
I will definitey write more!!! as soon i possible can(: Thank you!!! just keep an eye out for more!!!
emilybwritesgreat job i loved it! could you check out my peom "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate! it would mean a lot!!!
spiritofdeathI really enjoyed it! I never been such a fan of vampire novels, but now I think I'm changed! :) Keep it up!
littlemisssarbearI like your instinctive and imaginative work :D it had an atmosphere about it that keeps readers wanting more and more until they split into two :) keep going...I'll be keeping tabs on your work ahaa :D
Thank you so much! And I will definitey be wrting more as soon i get more inspiration(:
Angelnight16i've only read the first chapter so far, and i think its sweet. only i think you might want to vary your word choice, and add a few more descriptions. but other than that keep up the good work!!
thanks!!! i really appreciate it!!! ill be posting more as soon as i can!!!
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