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We are a country founded on the many cultures that are drawn here by the promise of a better life. Historically, we have prided ourselves on being a cultural melting pot. However, the increasing number of illegal immigrants is becoming a problem. An illegal immigrant is someone who has either entered a country without permission or who, after being granted entry, has stayed beyond the allowed time. And although many think this is a uniquely American problem, it is also happening in many prosperous countries in Europe.

This raises an interesting moral conflict, because although illegal immigrants have broken the law, they are ­often forced to do so out of a desperate need to survive and support their ­families.

Why is immigration considered such a large problem in our country? A common concern is that illegal immigrants put financial burdens on our schools and hospitals, and often do not pay their share of taxes. Another concern is that illegal immigrants take jobs away from American citizens.

Many solutions have been suggested – from increasing border control and installing fences, to granting amnesty – but so far not one has solved the problem. If we increase border control and install fences, we are simply slowing the problem. Furthermore, that would be very expensive and, based on past experience, not very effective. It also has a negative ecological impact, ­disrupting animal migration and the natural flow of rivers. Conversely, by granting amnesty to all, we are rewarding lawbreakers, which will possibly encourage more people to enter illegally. We tried this tactic in 1986, granting amnesty to 2.7 million illegal immigrants. Before this, 140,000 people ­immigrated here illegally each year; now there are 700,000.

Many suggest ways of slowing or avoiding the problem, but in reality we need to end it. To do this, we have to tackle it at the source. We must eliminate the reasons people enter the U.S. illegally. Primarily they come for jobs. Many businesses will hire cheap labor so they can sell their products at lower prices and stay competitive. Employers who hire illegal immigrants benefit at others’ expense. They contribute to the problem by creating a demand for illegal immigrants. We need to make them responsible for their actions and at the same time find ways to solve their problems.

My solution to immigration begins with eliminating incentives for people to come to America illegally. To do this, we must increase and enforce the penalties for employers who hire illegal immigrants. If employers don’t lure illegal immigrants here with jobs, then they may be less likely to try to get ­into our country illegally. On the ­positive side, there would be more jobs for legal citizens and only people who pay taxes would use our schools and hospitals.

Arizona sets an example of this proposed solution. On January 1, 2008, that state introduced a law that any business knowingly hiring an illegal immigrant will have its business license suspended. For the second offense, the license will be canceled. This may seem severe, but experience shows that penalties must be substantial to be effective.

Arizona may be a role model for the rest of the United States. However, because it has just implemented this law, we do not know how effective it will be, nor do we know what unforeseen aftershocks will result. I believe, though, that there is reason to be positive, because if we are to have a noticeable impact on this problem, we must have significant penalties for employers.

However, as with every solution, my proposed answer may spark new obstacles. If employers do not hire the cheap labor of illegal immigrants, they will have to hire American citizens who will probably demand a higher wage. As a result, products will be more expensive and consumers will pay higher prices. In response to this problem, the states should form committees with the brightest people in the immigration and economics fields to work with ­employers to help solve their employment needs and mitigate the effects on the economy. The committees would work with legislators to draft laws so businesses do not have to hire people illegally in order to compete.

My solution is focused on trying to come up with an immediate response to this problem. If we look at the big picture, however, the only long-term solution to illegal immigration is to think globally and realize the problem extends beyond our borders. To do this, we need to help neighboring countries balance their population growth with their resources, including food and housing. In this regard, the United States can play an important leadership role by providing direct help and by being a good role model.

Mexico’s population is growing at a rate that surpasses its economic capacity. About 40 percent of its population lives below the poverty level. As a result, Mexicans are in desperate need of jobs and income; thus, many immigrate to the United States. Eighty percent of people immigrating to the United States are from Mexico and Central America.

In conclusion, tightening borders may slow illegal immigration, but it is not a solution. If people want to come, they will find a way. Therefore, we must get rid of the reasons that illegal immigrants come to our country and establish incentives for employers not to hire them. We also must balance population growth so that in the future we have a world shared equally between people and the environment. To do this we need to look and think ­beyond our borders, and into the ­future, so this problem can disappear into the past.

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princess6 said...
Jan. 1, 2011 at 4:00 pm:
To Kate-When I stated that I didn't like the term "illegal alien", it was just my opinion, just like you stated your opinion when you wrote this article. I understand that you didn't mean to offend anyone, but this topic is one of the most contraversal..yet personal topics in our society. You are a great writer so you should continue writing! ;) And whether you like it or not our country NEEDS illegal immigrants, they contribute to every part of our society, it's not like an illegal immigrants l... (more »)
 
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Mario P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 4:54 pm:
Raul Hinojosa, PhD, Associate Professor of Chicana and Chicano Studies at the University of California at Los Angeles, in a July 18, 2005 BusinessWeek interview titled "A Massive Economic Development Boom," wrote:
 
Mario P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 4:54 pm :
"First and foremost, [illegal immigration] it's a source of value added. The total goods and services that they consume through their paycheck, plus all that they produce for their employers, is close to about $800 billion. They're also producing at relatively lower costs because the undocumented population typically gets about 20% less in wages than if they were legalized. That leads to lower prices for us and higher profits to employers. In addition, they're obviously a huge consumer base. ... (more »)
 
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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 3:44 pm:

people should stop telling the author everything that is wrong with her article. this whole debacle is merely a matter of opinion. there is not specific *right* or *wrong*. you should respect her because she obviously spent a lot of time gathering research for this piece.

as for the actual content, i love your writing. you are a great writer and very persuasive. i like how you have a solution, rather than just saying how wrong the illegal immigrants are. well done!

 
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Kate. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 3:12 pm:

It'd really be nice if people read my whole article before completely reprimanding it!

I understand the reasons why immigrants come over illegally! I understand that it's a tough economy worldwide and it's easier to come to America illegally than legally. I understand aliens typically do jobs most Americans wouldn't do. I understand all that!

I am merely pointing out a solution to ease the problem.

 
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bennyBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 1:04 pm:
well my parents are mexican adn are iligal imigrants here in the Us I am legal how ever. amd the only reason the iligal imigrants come here is to get a better life, if the us has horrible conditions wouldnt you want to move somewere out
 
Kate. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 2:56 pm :
Of course I would! I am not questioning and condeming why immigrants come here. I am condeming those that do it ILLEGALLY. As in breaking the law.
 
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Mario P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 7:46 pm:

3 reasons why Illegal Immigration is good:

1. They boost the economy by providing cheap labor so that food prices stay low, which in turn lowers the prices of everything else and make everything more affordable. It's a domino effect. 

2. They do not pay taxes, however, they put in a lot more money into this economy, and put in 10 times the amount of money that they take out of the american economy. 

and 3. They are so abundant that it would actually co... (more »)

 
Mario P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 4:36 pm :

When food prices lower, the people who buy the food have more money to spend on technology, education, luxuries, and much more. When people spend money on those things, the companies that produce them can continue to advance their knowledge and technology. Food is one of the basic necessities of man, to increase the price of food would crumble the entire economy. 

They do NOT send money back home. When you make $50 a day and have to feed your family, pay for rent, bills,... (more »)

 
juju.gee replied...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 3:44 pm :

Actually, most illegal immigrants do pay taxes. If they ever want to have a chance at becoming a permanent resident of the U.S they need to have proof and legal documents that show that they have not left the country or been deported. Most of the illegal immigrants applying for residency pay their taxes because they can later use the tax forms as evidence that they have stayed in the U.S and have not returned to their homeland. Because of illegal immigrants paying their taxes the U.S gains at... (more »)

 
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susu.ali said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 2:27 pm:
if america wanted to stop illegal immigrants from coming in to the u.s. they would of a long time ago.... corporations love cheap labor and have been having mexicans come in to work for hundreds of years. so, although your article is well written, don't be delusional. the jobs that the "illegal" as you so call them do, you wouldn't even do!!!
 
Kate. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 3:00 pm :

I am not delusional. I am not claiming that I would do them---nothing of the sorts!

I have not said anything bad about the illegal immigrants! This article is MERELY POINTED OUT SOLUTIONS TO AN EPIC PROBLEM.

Don't blow what I had to say out of proportions.

 
Mario P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 4:28 pm :

You are saying that they hurt our economy, you are saying that they dont pay taxes, and you are claiming that we would be better off without them. What part of that doesn't sound bad to you? I don't think it's the illegal immigrants that are harming our economy. Maybe you should read up on the Federal Reserve, or looks at economic trends in the past 50-100 years. 

This "EPIC PROBLEM" is what keeps this country running, it's what gives you a comfortable life at the expense of other... (more »)

 
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aimtoshine said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 6:39 pm:
I haven't read through all of the comments yet, only the article, but sometimes I wonder why our nice, fat country doesn't look at the part where if we actually helped out Mexico's situation they wouldn't feel the need to come here at all, maybe we'd just rather spend all our money on renewing our asphalt every two months and making nice big football stadiums for our favorite highschools. Sometimes I'm ashamed of where I come from, I feel like we the people shrugged off the statue of Libe... (more »)
 
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princess6 said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 7:11 pm:
My dad came to the United States illegally when he was only 17, now he is a proud American citizen. People do not understand how hard it is to cross the Mexican/American border illegally THOUSANDS of people attempt it each year but only HUNDREDS make it alive. I respect your opinion but I definetly do NOT agree with it. I'm happy to say That I belong to both sides of the border!!! :D
 
princess6 replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 7:42 pm :
Also I don't like how some people refer to illegal immigigrants as illegal allians, they are human just like me and you and we should treat them with the same respect. 
 
Kate. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 12:29 pm :

I do understand that it must be extremely difficult. I am not saying that it is not. I understand that the illegal immigrants are extremely dedicated and devoted, and I respect that they are so passionate about coming to America. My problem is that they break the law to do so. I am not trying to make the illegal immigrants out to be horrible bad awful people. What I am saying is that we need to find ways so that the immigrants will come here LEGALLY. As in not breaking the law.

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Jesse H. replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 10:22 am :

Then, maybe the kick is to try to make the immigration law a bit "easier"?

Because the problem not only lies in the fact that immigrants try to find better source of income but also the fact that immigration legally into the US is a lengthy, costy and hard process, not even guaranteeing the success, especially in lower income countries. Hence, they try to cross the border illegaly.

A good thoughts and good spirit though. I know you strive for solutions(Just like I do, as we all ... (more »)

 
dustin ray replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 6:59 pm :
TELL YOU THE TRUTH I DONT WANT TO LIVE LIKE SARDINES. THATS WHATS GOING TO END UP HAVING IF SO MANY MEXICANS KEEP GETTIN ACROSS THE BORDER. SO THEY NEED TO BE DEPORTED IMMEDIATLY
 
gcgutierrez1994 replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 1:20 pm :
Dustin Ray: i like how you specifically use the race MEXICANS when Mexicans aren't the only IMMIGRANTS coming into the U.S. i  was born in Namiquipa, Chihuahua. i am a straight a student, a soccer player and i was in Orchestra (Varsity) my freshman and sophomore year. i am certainly not a troublemaker nor am i a detriment to my newfound country. i am fighting to obtain my legal residency and i probably know more about the United States and its history than you. Please think before you post ... (more »)
 
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