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Ending the War on Terrorism This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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Since 9/11, fighting terrorism has become a top priority in our nation. Each year, the U.S. spends billions of dollars on the war in Iraq, attempting to dismantle the extremist groups that threaten us. However, we have had troops in Iraq for eight years and still terrorist groups continue to operate.

People in 22 of the 23 countries ­surveyed believe that the war in Iraq hasn't weakened the terrorist group al-Qaeda, according to a global poll by the BBC World Service. If eight years
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of war have had little effect on terrorism, it's obvious that America needs a new approach. To truly work toward a solution, we must help stabilize Muslim countries associated with terrorist networks. The most effective way to fight terrorism in the Middle East is to help these countries create a thriving economy, a functional government, and a successful educational system.

The war in Iraq is a temporary attempt at solving the problem of terrorism. Even if troops disable certain terrorist groups, they can't prevent new ones from forming. In fact, military suppression of a country tends to lead to more support for extremist groups. “Building a gauntlet of security around the U.S. and pounding Muslims into submission isn't going to make the world any safer,” wrote journalist Todd Wilkinson in the Bozeman Daily Chronicle.

To truly work through the issue of terrorism, America must look at its roots. Extremist groups exist in every religion. It is only when these groups gain power that they become dangerous. This tends to occur when a country is unstable. For example, after the Soviet occupation of Afghanistan in the 1980s, the Taliban took control of the region. If America provides support to countries experiencing instability, we will help prevent terrorist groups from taking power.

According to Benazir Bhutto, Pakistan's former prime minister who was assassinated in 2007, “Extremism, militancy, terrorism and dictatorship feed off one another in an environment of poverty, hopelessness and economic disparity among social classes.” Therefore, in order to disarm terrorism, we must combat these factors.

The first step to accomplishing this is to support the creation of educational systems that allow children to rise above the social and economic situation of their parents. Today, ­Pakistan spends 1,400 percent more on its military budget than on education, according to Bhutto in her book, Reconciliation: Islam, Democracy, and the West. As a result, poor communities that don't have access to schools either go uneducated or turn to militant schools, known as madrassas. In the words of Bhutto, “From illiteracy and poverty stem hopelessness and from hopelessness come desperation and extremism.”

Some militant madrassas are seen as breeding grounds for terrorists because rather than focusing on education, they “manipulate religion to brainwash children” into soldiers, according to Bhutto. The U.S. needs to take the first step in providing international support to help Pakistan and other Islamic governments prioritize spending on education. In doing so, it would begin to prevent extremism. “There's nothing which disarms hatred more thoroughly than the promise of attaining a better life through peace,” according to Wilkinson.

Strengthening education in the Middle East will also boost local economies. When educated children surpass the economic status of their parents, a middle class is created. Micro loan programs can also aid the creation of a middle class, which is ­essential to a strong workforce and a stable country.

A strong middle class is also essential for a successful democracy. While the U.S. should not force democracy on any country, by supporting stable, civil governments, we can keep terrorist networks from moving into power. In Saudi Arabia in 2007, a woman who had been gang raped was ­sentenced by the government to 60 lashes and six months in jail. Stability cannot exist in this type of unjust government. As the book Enhancing Peace insightfully articulates, “Letting social inequities and injustices fester provides a rich breeding ground for terrorists.”

There is currently a strong sense in the Muslim world that the West wishes to impose its values on other societies and undermine Islamic culture. Many moderate Muslims see the global war on terror as a war on Islam, according to Bhutto. This is not the image that will help the U.S. build allies.

America needs to build a strong relationship with the Middle East to combat terrorism. When we earn the trust of moderate Muslims, we can join with them to overthrow extremist groups. This method aided the U.S. immensely during the war in Afghan­istan when we sided with the Northern Alliance (the anti-Taliban coalition made up of several Islamic ethnic groups) to overthrow the Taliban.

How can we create the type of dramatic change in perception that's needed? The answer is to invest against terrorism by stabilizing the Middle East. As Bhutto wrote, “When ordinary people identify assistance improving their lives and the lives of their children, they bond with the source of that aid.” This type of connection could bring a dramatic turnaround in perceptions of America. In fact, substantial evidence supports this. After the 2005 earthquake in Pakistan that killed 90,000 people, the U.S. donated half a billion dollars for reconstruction, and American soldiers delivered assistance to freezing and starving survivors. A poll conducted by ACNielsen immediately afterward showed that favorable views of the U.S. increased by over 50 percent. The same poll indicated “a precipitous drop in support for Osama bin Laden and al-Qaeda,” according to Bhutto. Direct and visible support from the U.S. creates dramatic changes in perceptions over a short period of time.

Creating and supporting organizations that stabilize the Middle East should be regarded by the U.S. as long-term investments against terrorism. Through the Marshall Plan, implemented in Europe after World War II, the U.S. spent about $13 billion to aid the recovery of European countries. The modern-day equivalent of that amount is about $185 billion. This money could be spent on rebuilding the Middle East, and if this cost were shared by North America, the European Union, Japan and China, the U.S. would contribute just $37 billion, compared to the estimated $2 trillion for the war in Iraq by the time it has ended.

But a solution shouldn't just be about writing checks. It should be about Americans working with Iraqi citizens to support visible, clear, and direct programs that give people what they need. This type of solution not only makes sense for the U.S. but is morally right. To paraphrase Greg Mortenson – who has spent the last decade building schools in Afghan­istan and Pakistan – money can fund wars; it can also prevent them.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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Macx14 said...
Aug. 31 at 3:41 pm:

Fantastic writing! My eight year-old brother and I were watching a documentary on 9/11 and he said, "Why does there have to be war? Why don't people like each other?"

 
MairGwyn replied...
Aug. 31 at 7:27 pm :

The answer to that question.... because men are men lol

 
Macx14 replied...
Aug. 31 at 8:27 pm :

You bet, haha!!

 
MairGwyn replied...
Aug. 31 at 8:29 pm :

yupp, they have a book out with a good answer to that, and that's it lol. Lavinia by Ursula leguin

 
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frnkplss55 said...
Aug. 31 at 3:12 pm:

I really like your article and I hope that you keep writing!

 
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C_B_Mia said...
Aug. 9 at 10:17 pm:

Great article!

I was nearly killed twice as a baby because of suicide attacks. This was when I was in my mom's stomach. If my mom has been in those two situations.... which she so easily could have been... my whole family would not be alive right now.

 
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Threefiddy said...
Jul. 15 at 10:31 pm:

Violence is down in Iraq roughly 80-90 percent.

 
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John said...
Jun. 4 at 3:18 pm:

 Well written article but I disagree with the practicality of such matters. The author states that the war on terrorism should be replaced with an effort to stabilize the Muslim countries in the Middle East by creating “a thriving economy, a functional government, and a successful educational system.” While this would be good, this is very unpractical and is, in essence, what the soldiers in Iraq right now are doing. The problem is that these countries are very unstabl... (more »)

 
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jdeluca said...
Jun. 4 at 12:39 am:

Israel and Pakistan have been in a fight for hundreds of years over a piece of crappy land, the gaza strip. I don't understand why they want to have that land. I'm a little unclear on the topic can someone explain to me why each country wants the land? I know it has to do a bit with religion but I still need more information...

 
starlight26:) replied...
Jun. 4 at 7:30 pm :

They are using religion as an excuse. Islam,(the muslim religion) does not teach anything that has to do with war and terrorism. It teaches the absolute  opposite. Peace and love~

 
gymbabe replied...
Jul. 18 at 12:54 am :

Umm, hate to burst your bubble, but no, it doesn't.  And they fight over the land of Israel because both believe it is their rightful homeland, although the one has a much more legitimate claim.

 
C_B_Mia replied...
Aug. 9 at 10:16 pm :

Israel and Palestine are fighting because of unresolved issues, that go back way before Israel was a nation. It is exteremly complicated, but the war is more than over a small plot of land. The problem is that places such as the Gaza Strip and Lebanon have good people--- but they are run by terrorist organizations called Hamas and Hezbollah. These organizations hate Israel more that they love thier own people. They send bombs and suicide bombers to Israel. Israel fights back in their own defe... (more »)

 
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kandyraye said...
May 29 at 6:46 am:

I am currently serving on my 2nd tour to Iraq.... and I can most certainly say that we are waisting our time there. We rebuild schools and try to build relations with the local mayors of each province... but it does no good. You can't help a nation that wants no help. What America and our government is failing to realize is that all we are doing is delaying a civil war. The shiates and the sunnies are going to have their civil war. Other than the americans being nosey we had no grounds to invaid... (more »)

 
beautifuldisaster18 replied...
Aug. 9 at 10:15 am :

If you are so against this, than why did you join the military! I'm thankful that we have people that fight for our country, but if all you're going to do is complain, why should I be thankful. I mean, don't get me wrong, I still am. Even if you are going to complain I'm still thankful that you risk your life for our country. That's courage. But it just bugs me when you complain. Please remember, it was your choice to join...

 
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JacobMeeks said...
Mar. 8 at 6:49 pm:

Here is how to end the war in the Middle East, the United States needs to stop invading countries and doing so for no grounds other than the desire for resources and to create an Imperialist Monarchy over limited supplies of oil etc.

 
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guineapiglover said...
Mar. 8 at 12:51 pm:

To qoute Benjamin Franklin;
"For peace to prevail, war must ensue."

 
jdeluca replied...
Jun. 4 at 12:35 am :

"For peace to prevail, war must ensue." wise words from a great founding father

 
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angelic_powers said...
Mar. 6 at 5:41 am:

I loved your article. it is accurate as it is based on facts. And your suggestions does shows that humanity stands first and just because of few extremist the whole community shouldnt suffer. Helping these countries by aidiing educational help and international support can really make life a better living for them and will help lot of people in Iraq, Afghanistan from not becoming the part of terrorism due to poverty..

 
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justin said...
Feb. 14 at 7:24 am:

The reason why it is not working is because Iraq is not the one who was behind the attack of 9/11. The initial reason for invading Iraq was because Bush though they have WMD. A few years after the war and Bush changed the cause of this war to War on Terrorism because they couldn't find any WMD. The 19 hijackers and the mastermind from 9/11 were from Saudi Arabia, Lebanon, Egypt and United Arab Emirate. None from Iraq. Their headquarter or training camps were not even from Iraq. So how... (more »)

 
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Skeezics said...
Jan. 29 at 4:07 pm:

Ya i do know that thank you very much. Thing is though this is as much our war as it is yours.

 
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MJBlack said...
Jan. 7 at 12:42 am:

I was born in Israel, The Land of Zion as some people call it, and most people would think that I should be greatful that America is "helping" us out. But I think that America should keep it's nose in it's own business, we've been fighting the same war with the Arabs for two thousand years, what makes Americans think that they can walk on in, fix everything, and then walk back out the heros? I'm not saying that I'm unfeeling towards those who are serving overse... (more »)

 
Skeezics replied...
Jan. 28 at 9:39 pm :

Did you happen to forget that it was them who flew THEIR jet into OUR towers killing all of those people?

 
Sciencefreak replied...
Jan. 28 at 9:50 pm :

I agree with skeezics. It was them who bombarded our towers with their jet and we are just trying to nail the idiots that nailed us first.

 
MJBlack replied...
Jan. 29 at 11:45 am :

you seem to forget that you were at war with them before 9/11

 
MJBlack replied...
Jan. 29 at 11:46 am :

you both seem to forget that America was at war with them before 9/11

 
HistoryCounts replied...
Jan. 31 at 9:09 am :

MJBlack, How long has Israel been a nation? who created the borders in the Middle East, and when were they created? Did Britain and the other members of the treaty of Paris actually consult with the existing leaders in the Arab world when they made their decisions or did the western nations arbitrarily create this area without the input from these "incapable children" ?
when you look at the real history of the region you can trace events of today back to the decisions made witho... (more »)

 
MJBlack replied...
Jan. 31 at 3:54 pm :

The land that is called Israel was promised to the Jews by God, are you telling me that what mere men have to say about "borders" is more important then what God does?

 
Sara! replied...
Feb. 3 at 7:13 am :

I agree with MJBlack

 
MJBlack replied...
Feb. 3 at 10:23 am :

thank you, you are so kind

 
june replied...
Feb. 14 at 7:01 am :

you guys have it all wrong of who attacked and who is attacking who in history and the present. First of all, it is the Palestinians that have conflicts with the Israelis. As for 9/11, there were a total of 19 hijackers. 15 of those hijackers were Saudi Arabian, 2 hijackers were United Arab Emirates, 1 hijacker was Egyptian and 1 hijacker was Lebanese. The mastermind of 9/11, Osama bin Ladin is Saudi Arabian. Please do not mix people up just because they are from around the same or surround... (more »)

 
JacobMeeks replied...
Mar. 8 at 6:50 pm :

There was not a single Iraqi on the plane on 9/11

 
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tomtamtimmy said...
Jan. 6 at 4:20 am:

i agree with you. not to long ago there was a foiled terror attack on an army base that helps distribute supplies at glenfield which is very close to where my grandmother lives. terrorists manipulate people. they give hope to those that dont have any. then they turn them into a fighting force. other countries can do their best to help Iraq. but they cant seem to be manipulating them either. my article coming out is called is war necessary under any circumstance?. check it out when it comes out. ... (more »)

 
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rightsfan said...
Jan. 5 at 8:46 pm:

I loved your article it was beatiful and the best thing I've read in a while. I had to do an essay on your article and it really made me think about the world around me again. I have a sigesttion for you if you like human rights watch Billy Jack. You reminded me a little about the girl in it. thats a comliment. I totally agree with you that peace and kindness needs to be spead through out the middle East not war and haterid

 
starlight26:) replied...
Jun. 4 at 7:32 pm :

Exactly.!!!!! I agree.

 
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toxic.monkey said...
Jan. 3 at 9:46 am:

i agree with you! i'd just like to emphasize the equality of race religion and especially gender... and you've written this so well- not too much or too little info, just enough to support your arguments. goooood job! :)

 
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Fayrouz said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 7:58 pm:

If Americans think they went to Iraq to keep themselves safe or fight terrorism or stop a dictator or because of weapons of mass destruction, they're wrong. They went to destroy the Middle East so they could have a prominent presence in it, so future decisions made in the Middle East affecting the world would be checked by the West. The Middle East was fine before the US started bombing. Entering Iraq and tried to stop terrorism with the uneffective ways used now will only spark more terrorism.

 
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PurpleMidnight said...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 5:54 pm:

Great post, you've presented your ideas clearly and strongly, but I disagree with you. I agree that war is never right, but many times it is neccesary. You cannot always expect to do much with trying to take a peacful approach in solving countries problems. As we try to build better communities and governments, the Taliban and other extremist groups will tear them down. If war cannot stop new terroist groups from forming, how can peace? Still, great article though. Keep on writing!

 
M.A.C. replied...
Jan. 5 at 4:19 pm :

I agree with you on the writing, but only half with what you're saying. Most times, people just believe war only has a good and bad side to it, and think that, if they win, they will get a good shot at the so-called bad side. But yes, sometimes war is necessary.

 
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