Mixed Feelings

By NamezTJ, scottsville, NY

When fun dies
Its is sad
So you sit
and Cry

When you hurt
You dispise
So you seek
your revenge

When you hurt an other
You feel guilt
That's why
You apologise

Where someone is hurt
you sympathise
That's when
You give him a hug.

Being in love
is not funny
but then why, may i ask
does it cause you to smile?

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bamboom212 said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 7:24 pm:

No prob. I liked readin em :D hope 2 c more ^_^

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bamboom212 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 7:08 pm:

I like this alot 2. It makes perfect sense while getting right 2 the point. Ur really good :)

Mikey^_^ replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:45 am :

thanks! I've noticed you've commented on a couple of my poems :D Ty I need the feedback.

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amyxu said...
Jun. 15, 2009 at 7:25 pm:

Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and I came across your poem. I like how it gets the point across in a small amount of space and yet how it doesn't feel overcrowded or in-your-face. Good job!

Mikey^_^ replied...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 4:39 pm :

thanks it means a lot :)