This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.Wow. The topic is somewhat disturbing, but I liked it. You shed a little light for a subject that is avoided and ignored. Great job!
I can somewhat really relate to this. Thanks for reminding me. =)
I like the poem it reminds me of the time I was in 6 grade.
Good poem... very detailed but very eerie.. if thats whats you were going for then good job... but yea good job... read my poetry if you want
UUmm wow....a very deep throught circles my mind after reading this...
Wow, that was...slightly disturbing. I loved it, though. Great job! Keep writing!
it's interestingg, i like that it wasnt in 1st person like most poems about this topic usually are...somewhat disturbing, but it grabbed my attention. Good job ohh and check out my work pleasee:)
It was touching, and very well written. But it also seemed like a topic I have seen done over and over, or something i would have to read in health class. But that aside, your imagery was disturbing as the subject, and i enjoyed it.
i liked this. it had a sort of creepy edge to it but i think thats what completes it. great job.
This is a very good piece. I agree, it's slightly disturbing, but definitely a style i love to write and read. Inspirable.
heyy love the poem. it's rather eerie (:
This amazes me. =]
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