If I had to choose between you and life. I would say my final goodbye. I realy hope it would be quick I couldn't stand to hear you cry. As long as you were my last sight it would have been all worth while. As long as my memory doesn't fade a picture of you loving smile. As long as I felt your warm touch on my slowly chilling flesh. Well then it would have been all worth it to take my last BREATHE.
ProdigalDaughterYeah I love writing ,but lets just say I'm not the best when it come to spelling. Plus when I wrote this it was eight oclock in the morning and I hadn't sleep all night.
Man I got the shivers. Beautiful!
Read mine? http://www.teenink.com/raw/Poetry/article/112851/Caution-May-Contain-Karma/
Read mine? http://www.teenink.com/raw/Poetry/article/112851/Caution-May-Contain-Karma/
This is really sweet and whistful. Breath is spelled without an E, though.
SilverDawnThat was really good! Just a few spelling errors here and there but the meaning is so lovely (: the rhymes are so perfectly put into lines that make perfect sense and sound... again, perfect !
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