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Child of the Snow (Snow Angel) This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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Photo credit: Susannah B., Greenwich, CT
You spin in diamond
Pale as the snow you came from
Spring sends you away
This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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Niccole C. said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 4:19 pm:

I like it a lot

 
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hotpink_girl200 said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 7:53 pm:

sweet simple and beautiful

 
samantha.rose replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 7:09 am :

of course its simple... its a haiku poem.
duh.

 
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Ramna said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 1:31 am:

Very nice. Class all the way. Read my work? Please don't hesitate to comment. Thanks.

 
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babe892 said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 7:22 am:

The title of this reminded me of the Elliott Smith song "Snow Angel", so in reading it, I was almost expecting something similar just because the title sort of called that to mind. And let me tell you, I wasn't disappointed. Short, simple, to the point, but very poignant.

 
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Samantha G. said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 9:20 pm:

great haiku

 
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MorningStar15 said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 1:13 am:

Simple so simple! but soooo soooo beautiful...

 
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Angel*music*lover said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 5:24 pm:

I really love how you can say what you want to in little words. it is perfect!

 
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Melinda L. said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 12:00 am:

that was sweet and simple. nice job!

 
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