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Photo credit: Kayla C., Burlington, NC
with quick and helpful hands
shaping my poetry (slowly)
to what I want it to
look like
sculpting my mind
onto paper
pushing around my dreams
until they fit in order,
the perfect shape.
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I am a Sculptor 
By Brooke T., Rochester Hills, MI
with quick and helpful hands
shaping my poetry (slowly)
to what I want it to
look like
sculpting my mind
onto paper
pushing around my dreams
until they fit in order,
the perfect shape.
This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.
sarah.ci like it.it describes everyone on teen ink pretty well.
Schubstergreat poem :) i think the title fits everyone on Teenink. again, great job and keep writing.
I think when you wrote "shaping my poetry (slowly)
to what I want it to
look like"
Having the "look like" on another line is incredibly tacky. It stops the reader in their tracks and makes them spew. But putting it in the line above gives it a great sense of dictation and dicipline.
Otherwise, its fantastic, and I really reccomend you keep going.
MorningStar15
briliant? ITS WICKED! i <3d it tons.
<3
kayla
The diction fits well with what youre talking about, however the words you used to say them with were not the best, in my opinion. Maybe an extended metaphor would be better here.
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