Teen Ink

Powd3er said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 2:53 pm:

This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Cady_ said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 10:22 pm:

I tagged this as a favorite, it is probably the one I would rate to be the best one that touched me, FIVE STARS definately.

 

Regisky10 said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 10:33 pm:

This was so deep, it could be shallow. I loved it!

 

Cady_ replied...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 10:23 pm :

I believe it was deep as well, and I think she should keep writting..

 

KICK3593 said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 7:54 pm:

Good. At least you insist on something natural and a little more original in human nature.

 

i<3jesus636 said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 3:14 pm:

This poem is very deep. I love the flow, the words, the beauty- everything about it. Keep writing!

 

aspiring.author.09 said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 8:30 am:

This was very intriguing. I'm not sure I really understand ALL of it, but I do get some of it, and this poem was very good. I'd love to hear more from you, great job!

 

Desiree R. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 9:25 am:

I love this poem.

 

Yael R. said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 9:58 pm:

i love the imagery that evokes movement (train/ swirling etc.) you really feel swept up in the poem

 

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Shanika P. said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 6:17 pm:

"Cohesive:
our humanity --
a fresh scar
sole tear
lone kiss"

I like that.

 

Eilina S. said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 3:40 pm:

Amazingly, this stads out from all the other suff her. Its a whirlwind of ideas that don't stop. This is what freestyle poetry is at a normal level. This is the kind of thing normal people should be writing. It has a vague rythym, and a theme. That's all it needs. Well done!

 

babe892 said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 7:20 am:

This was really great- I loved it! What great images to put out there, so vivid, so interesting.

 

despurlock said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 5:24 pm:

This is the second time I have read this poem and it becomes better with every reading! Keep up the great work!

 

LilJ<3 said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 12:53 am:

this is great. you are really talented.

 

Alexia B. said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 5:23 pm:

i love this poem

 

MorningStar15 said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 1:02 am:

i have never read anything like it before! it was so original and sweet... i loved it i truely did... thanks for posting it! <3, Kayla P.S. i posted a ton of new work...check it out...please and thank you...

 

Duckie430 said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 5:52 pm:

really beautiful. good job.

 

MszRAiNDROPsz said...
Jul. 24, 2009 at 2:46 am:

deep. i love it.

 

His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Jul. 23, 2009 at 9:15 pm:

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! great job!!

 

samcarter said...
Jul. 22, 2009 at 5:27 pm:

i like this because its so simple but still really deep

 

Melinda L. said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 10:46 pm:

Okay, i agree with everyone who commented...that was incredible, amazing, beautiful, wonderful. great job!

 

Hollywog. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 3:57 am:

Incredible!!

 

Valentina T. said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 7:05 pm:

wow... that is really amazing

 

despurlock said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 2:49 am:

Beautiful!

 

Schubster said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 2:08 pm:

wonderful. I loved it.