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We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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limelove said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 9:32 pm:
I love it and i can teel by the words you choose and what you said that this friendship will really last forever.
 
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WritingLoverForeverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 4:44 pm:
Beautiful. A testimony to friendship.
 
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jade-lynn15 said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 10:03 am:
I absolutely loved it! It perfectly describes the bond between best friends, good job keep it up!
 
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JohnniK said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 8:55 am:
Its soooooooo great poem you wrote thanks for sharing
 
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SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 9:34 pm:
Such a great poem, I love it! Makes me think of my best friend, haha.
 
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Navi-Talmid-Shel-Seraphim said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 12:13 pm:
This is a wonderful poem! WOW! Keep up the good work. :)
 
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MRose911 said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 2:23 am:
I love this! :) Great work!
 
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dolphin13 said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 8:30 am:
Great Poem! Friendship is so important! Love it!
 
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AsIAmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 6:06 pm:
LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!! Just change 'know' to 'knew'. :)
 
LightMeUpTheStars replied...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 2:25 pm :
I think she put it as "know" because the friendship is still alive. If it was "knew" then the friendship would've ended because it would've been in the past tense.
 
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Vanne said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 4:33 pm:
You know i actually use to think just like this....i believed best friends were real and were true, that they could help and not be judgemental....but i was wrong.....and even thou i dnt believe in best friends anymore, i enjoyed ur poem :)
 
ilikef00d replied...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 10:43 am :
friends are from the heart, you just have to find one u believe is gonna stay by your sidee.
 
live2swim replied...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 10:49 am :
i agree with ilikef00d:) they really do come your heart, and they will always stay by your side:)
 
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AsIAmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 6:06 pm:
Ummm, Pat, maybe not a brilliant idea to give out all your info over the internet. Just be careful! :)
 
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pinkhottie265 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 9:19 am:
That is a marvalous poem! I wish my best friend could relize thats how shes suppose to act!
 
CassieOs replied...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 2:21 pm :
Amen to that sister!
 
k2bebi18 replied...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 4:09 pm :
yeah!!!!! true dhat sum do not act like dhat but they need 2 realize that
 
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soccerswim25 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 9:18 am:
i thought the poem was really good and its soundslike your very talented! ilove it because i can connect with it and hope you post more!:)
 
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SlovesJ said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 4:27 pm:
I love this poem. It reminds me of me and my best friend, as well al me amd my boyfriend
 
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AndrewC said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 8:42 am:
You used the typical kindergarten rhyme, and I really didn't feel it.  Its like you just wrote down words without feeling them.  You tried to be to "perfect".  Open up a bit and write.
 
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