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Best Friends Forever MAG
We've been friends now,
for quite a while.
Through ups and downs,
tears and smiles.
All those letters ending,
best friends forever.
All those ideas,
some crazy, some clever.
We shared the bad times,
and the happiness,
We know our friendship,
would be nothing less.
The times we spent together,
I'll always keep in my heart.
We know these memories,
would last from the start.
Talking for hours on the phone,
you always had good advice to loan.
So I dedicate this poem to you,
because you're a friend who has stayed true!
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Maryberry28mt BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 4:18 pm
It was okay. Little too simple for my taste. Needs more descriptive words.
Ivyalyn said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 1:50 pm
I really liked how you used Rhythm in your poem. It really added to the effect. I also liked how you made kind of like a limerick with your rhythming patterns. Great job(:
sydzue said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 8:06 am
Your poem was good; it had a rhythm that flowed very smoothly, and was easy to read. Your figuritive language expressed your thoughts really nicely and it was very good.
Lauren T. said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 8:01 am
I thought this piece of poetry was deep gave a little but of a heart warming feeling to me. In your poetry I found scansion, and found a rhythm to your poem. On the ending words of a verse, I also found assonance with long sounds that were the same.
decievinghimesama SILVER said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 7:54 am
like it ♥ now I miss my best friend all the more
I think this was a pretty decent poem, yes, it wasn't deep and powerful, but poetry is whatever the author wishes it to be. It was simple, not spectacular, but still had some good ideas. I think with more editing and focus it could be even better. Keep writing :)
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:49 am
I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:49 am
I liked this especialy because the way I thought it was leading to one thing, and ended up somewhere else! Cograts on the publication! Nice Work!
rock ganxta said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 2:56 am
i lyk tha page
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 2:56 pm
it was okay i guess not that bad but keep writting
garthgirl8888 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:30 pm
good, but nothing spectacular...
kelly said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:12 pm
this poem made me think that my friendship would last from the start and i would love my best friend WealthyLoving.COMit's a right place for you. Online dating in the developed countries for the millionaire singles and admirers.
JuneTaz said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 4:16 pm
^^What she said
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One of the hardest things you'll ever have to do is to stop loving someone because they've stopped loving you.
I think it was amazing, even with the simple words, to me it seems pretty powerful :P I loved it, it made me think of my best friend...now I miss her