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Best Friends Forever MAG

By Anonymous

   



We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




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soldout said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 3:35 pm
To add some interest, you could change the title to " Me through You" or " Friends to Eternity". Try bringing a unique spark so more people are intrigued. After all, friendship can be expresses in so many ways. Find one that's fun to read!
BeatleMania16 said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 8:45 pm
this poem is well written. it moved me, because i'm experiencing the break-up of a 7-year friendship...
Fitzgerald96 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 12:49 pm
Fitzgerald96 GOLD, Folsom, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Writers aren&#039;t exactly people...they&#039;re a whole lot of people trying to be one person.&rdquo;<br /> F. Scott Fitzgerald quote

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This was a beautiful poem. You stated how everyone who is fortunate enough to have best friends or a best friend feels without leaving out anything or over gushing. It was simply what everyone wishes to articulate to their best friends. I loved it honest clear concise keep writing.     
TapeAbuser said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 12:20 pm
luv luv luv this. totally reminds me of my best friend. wen we first met she HATED me XD luv this poem AND my best friend!!! <3
Flouter GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 11:37 am
Flouter GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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LOVE this!
hannersXD said...
on Aug. 10 2011 at 10:40 am
omgg... i relate so much.  amazing use of words to express yourself!  i love it!!!!
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 10:03 am
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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Really good and it's so beautiful:)
CupcakeSaffy PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 11:20 pm
CupcakeSaffy PLATINUM, Cochrane, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away.&quot;

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Sorry, but I think you need to focus on using more strong emotion and passionate feelings than you used in this poem. The phrases and words were slightly predictable and clique. My advice: read more classical poetry and try practising similar language.
bochoyboy SILVER said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:50 pm
bochoyboy SILVER, Hersey, Michigan
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&quot; Time for an adventure&quot; - mike macdonald

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I didnt really like this poem very much. there are alot of very bland thoughts and ideas I thought. also its not really a subject i can relate on so maybe thats it.
LovelySerena said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:31 am
LovelySerena, Dededo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Hope is the thing with feathers that perches on the soul. ~Emily Dickinson

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I tagged this as FAVORITE!
ElleNicole BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 11:05 am
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;My role in society, or any artist&#039;s or poet&#039;s role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all.&quot;

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This is kinda like my poem 'Change' ...

Check it out?

RanaHewezi1998 SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 10:44 am
RanaHewezi1998 SILVER, Ames, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I&#039;ve ended up where I needed to be.&quot;<br /> -Douglas Adams

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awwwwwhhhh :') this poem is amazing! it totally describes my bff n I!
MusicBaby21 SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 1:04 am
MusicBaby21 SILVER, Austell, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I rather be 3 hours to soon then a minute to late.

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I think it's unique and beautiful.
MIssy96396 said...
on May. 6 2011 at 11:43 am
good poem! i showed it to my bestfriend <33
SeCeRtFrIeNd said...
on May. 5 2011 at 2:15 pm
THis poem is beautiful and i luv it, you did a really good job.....this poem is passionate, keep on writing poems you are really good at it. :)
Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 9:04 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Life isn&#039;t about finding yourself it&#039;s about creating yourself-

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I Love it! It's really good :)
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 8:07 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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Great job! I loved it.
AndySixxLover GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 1:33 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

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This is sooooooooo good my bestfrieng got kicked out of school because of me and i made her read this we both started to cry
cheerboo12 said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:55 am

omg so much memories love this poem an my bff's to serena pelin kirca love ya gurl

 

emoducks BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 11:27 am
emoducks BRONZE, Schuylkill Haven, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life will only be amazing if you make it that way.&quot; <br /> -Me (:

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this was an amazing poem :) i loved it :)