Sweet Shadow Dancer

Yeah, It's got such a fluent way to it. I love this so much and the twist it has to it, like you said in your quote. I want to read it over and over, that's how you know it's a good one. :)

Hi! Again, it was a pleasure to read your work. This is the second piece I read by you, and I love it just as much, which really proves your talent! It's a very nice piece, I particularly like the sonorities, the alliteration, the rhythm... It makes it flow very nicely :)

I loved the rhyming scheme, especially the "Sweet shadow dancer...spreads like a cancer," very clever and it flowed well. Your description and subtlety was outstanding. Great work.