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Dear Lover,
Give me not
A thousand precious jewels
Flirty words of embellishment
Or great promises of your supposed wealth
I care not for these things
I only want what my body desires
The deep passionate press of your lips against my skin
The cold wisps of your breath down my neck
The possessive grasp of your hands upon me
The long stare that mixes our hopes, dreams, fears, and desires creating a fixture of unrelenting passion
This is all I need
This is all I crave
When you come to my door bring nothing but you
To cool my heated core




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WeLiveForOurScarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 4:21 pm:
Frank and full of lust - I've gotta say, this is one of my favorites of yours. 
 
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9 at 4:30 pm:
Wow, this is very different from what i've read so far on this site. Human passion for aggresion and lust. What more could i say? 
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
yesterday at 2:41 pm :
Well teen ink is about the teenage experience and who does not experience lust and passion more than anyone else? Us of coarse. Thank you for understanding.
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 3:54 pm :
Amen to that, sister.
 
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ILuvBritishBoysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 6 at 9:54 am:
Wow nevermnd what I said on the other poem this one is now my new favorite!! Great Job!! I love this one!! :)
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 7 at 3:01 pm :
Thank You very much. I appreciate the enthusiasm. :)
 
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Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 6:26 am:
It's very nice.. I like it.. Good job!!!
 
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CammySThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 1, 2012 at 7:40 am:
I really liked that poem. I think that, no matter what someone says otherwise, love for someone else does feel like this, at least for a little while. Good piece!
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 2:32 pm :
Thank you so much
 
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WR1T3RThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 9:18 pm:
This poem is something I can relate to. You had me feeling how much you needed that person. I really loved the flow and the visual. The line 'The cold wisps of your breath down my neck' had me actually feeling it. Really loved the message. I can't wait to read more. :-)
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 12:17 pm :
Thanks :) I really appreciate the comments
 
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SnowflakesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 4:11 pm:
Wow. This was nice to read. I like the idea of wanting someone for how they make you feel emotionally and physically, rather than what they can give you financially and whatnot. I also like the last line 'To cool my heated core', it's strong and clearly shows the desperation of needing this persons touch. It was nice to read :) 
 
OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 11:51 am :
Thank You so much I really appreciate it. :):) Could you possibly recommend others to my writing? Comments like your's makes me a better writer.
 
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