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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?




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bmmscs said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:08 am:
Ha ha ha Mr Wilson u got told by your own students more like boy messes up girl doesn't forgive Mr. Wilson
 
ARR2 replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:44 am :
that has NOTHING to do with this poem. and its rude i on the other hand lovee this poem and think it should be read by everybody because it has such a great vibee. i love this poem and it is AMAZING!
 
bmmskf replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:46 am :
This poem has NOTHING to do with anything relating to Mr.Wilson.........anyway this poem is a very well written poem.
 
bmmsdm replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:54 am :
i agree mr.wilson is a great teacher and this poem is great also
 
bmmscs replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:55 am :
This is agood poem
 
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bmmsIC said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:07 am:
I love this poem sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
 
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BMMSThe gentleman said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:04 am:
reminds me of my language ats teacher b/c he plays with dolls.hahahahahah
 
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BMMSkf said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:04 am:
this one goes to my teacher Mr Wilson. HaHa. He should really read it> And i liked every bit of it
 
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horse said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 7:53 am:
i like this poem, it reminds me of chad! hahaha! jkjk
 
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Pa S. said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 5:17 pm:
so good i rated it twice.
 
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Pa S. said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 5:14 pm:
u have a fan in me
 
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bbg.101 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 3:12 pm:
wow i can relate! i love to see someone write like i do... very good poem! rate this a 500 MAX
 
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secrets said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 11:02 am:
you and me both. this is really good, and i hope you attain what you're looking for. no mockeries. but the real deal.
 
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BMMSAR said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 8:57 am:
at first i didnt get it then i read it again it makes me think and i really like this poem!!!
 
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bmmsmh said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 8:56 am:
this poem so fit's me right now haha
 
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BMMSKF said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 8:56 am:
This poem makes you sit back and thnk about what love really is....I like it.
 
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TNT25 said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 2:43 pm:
well written and extremely relatable.
 
The getleman replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 7:52 am :
Reminds me of the twilight series
 
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citylightsgrl93 said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 8:30 pm:
Definitely beautiful... very true and honest.
 
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passionatepoet22 said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 6:21 pm:
Loved it. :)
 
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