Report Abuse Home > All Poetry > The Break The Break By Josie, Montclair, NJ More by this author A crack and a sickening thud Falling in to the mud Screaming out in pain Stings like acid rain « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 7 comments. Post your own! Report abuse MEE said... Apr. 27, 2009 at 5:59 pm: a nice poem Report abuse marta said... Apr. 20, 2009 at 6:13 pm: cute Report abuse marta said... Apr. 14, 2009 at 4:10 pm: OUCH!! That must have hurt! Nice poem. Report abuse DustBuster said... Apr. 11, 2009 at 1:47 pm: Gr8t :) Report abuse Josie said... Apr. 11, 2009 at 1:21 pm: Cool poem:) iliketac0s replied... Apr. 9, 2010 at 2:38 pm : wait how come you complimented your own poem jw. Report abuse Josie said... Apr. 11, 2009 at 12:05 am: :)
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